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    Newbie rayman g's Avatar
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    Talking you don't know me

    yo i'm tha new man , fresh young nigga in tha hood
    some know my flow , and they say i'm good
    i'm fresh wit this new beat , and you gonna fill my heat
    fuck me you don't wanna fill my shit
    don't look for trouble man , you'ill start to struggle

    so don't play wit my flow ,cuz i'm new in this game

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    You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get deleted...

    But this was ok....but you should make your open mics a little longer than just 6 lines maybe like 10+ lines so....try to keep your lines around the same length....add multies to this to help the flow though...but overall this was ok...just elevate and keep at it.

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