verse112 vs. slipt

[Verse112]

8- 10 lines
10 mintutes
blindspit
no hate/crew/dr/
checkin and we'll begin

[Slipt]

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[Verse112]

you came to this battle win the word win on your lips/
i'm bout to make your block(head) ratttle shouldn't let your tongue slip/(slipt)
cause you don't pack shit even if you you did hit/
cause you pull peices out your ass not your hips/
you don't have the superior wits or blessed fists needed to take this/
so i'll dismiss this kid like a teacher who just can't take it/
i'm ill on flow and i'm not battle on a tip when i battle/
fuck it nm i'm the shit rap needs to catch up so i'll take my sobatical/
slipt your thighs like i do to bitches and the like/
thats it kid its over don't ever ask for a re-fight/

[Verse112]

Revised.....sorry i fucked up

you came to this battle with the word win on your lips/
i'm bout to make your block (head) rattle shouldn't a let your tongue slip/(slipt)
cause you don't pack shit even if you did hit/
cause you pull peices out out your ass not from the hips/
you don't have the superior wit or blessed fists to take this/
so i'm gonna dismiss you like a teacher who just can't take it/
i'm ill on the flow and i'm not bad on a tip when i battle/
fuck it nm i'm the shit raps needs to catch me so i'll take my sabatical/
split your thighs like i do to bitches and the like/
thats it kid its over your merked don't ever ask for a re-fight/

[Verse112]

i typed mine twice already i gave you ten minutes lets get going drop it
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[Slipt]

//~Automatic slugs, expellin frost at no cost, equip a vest
herb thugs, im freezin his center love, got em in a ice chest

//~Organ donor, face chopped-in-blocks, skin in ma flo-er
this guy could'nt rock the mic, if his last name was Bel-boa

//~Phat-Packs, on nut-sacks, these guys swing from dick heads
flatter me, every one of these ho's draws stained WIT reds

//~The win snatched, in my pocket, his verse so matched
N' u outta Sync, cant swing,..... wit no "Strings Attached "

//~Enough personal embrasment, he back steppin, he reckons
Like CAGES'S CARS, ya women are Gone in Sixty Seconds ~//

THINGS TO KNOW:


CENTER LOVE=FREEZING HIS HEART
ICE CHEST=HEART IN HIS CHEST, ICE CHEST
BEL-BOA-ROCKY BELBOA
STAINED WIT REDS=OVULATING
N' u outta SYNC = N'SYNC
SYNC= IS FLOW
NO STRINGS ATTACHED=N'SYNC ALBUM, (GAYEST ALBUM EVER)
CAGE= NICHLOUS, PLAYED IN GONE IN 60 SECONDS

"Interests rap,swing,women."

[Verse112]

I'M GONNA HAVE TO dq YOU you sorry son the rules were 10 minute spit you took 25 thats way over the time limit

[Slipt]

DUDE, OMG WHAT A BITCH

U KNOW HOW MANY TIMES BITCHES GO OVER THE TIME LIMIT ON ME~

BITCH~

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[Verse112]

you are 25 minutes over the time limit i said ten minute spit and i delivered ...i'm not arguing with you about this the rules were clearly posted and i told you drop after like 15 you chose to ignore me so i will take it up with the IR

[Slipt]

OO OK,,,,,,,,,,,,SORRY MAN,,,,,, THE WHOLE WORLD DOES'NT EVOVLE AROUND YOU AND YA 10 MINTUES ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[Slipt]

UPPIN
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[Rhymes]

yo after reading the verses and the biching my vote

Opener verse
flow Slipt
structure lipt
Personal slipt
injoyment tie
creativity tie
closer Slipt

overall lipt

it was a bit unfair that verse only had the ten minutes

but i guess you should make the time limite longer it would be better for you more time to think about wat your keyin

no hate jus an honest vote

return the time ad favour

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=96402

peace

[Slipt]

SOMEONE SEES IT MY WAY ABOUT THE TIME~

TEN LINES TEN MINUTES~
ANYWAYS HOW MANY TIMES DO PEOPLE GO OVER THE TIME LIMIT~
ALWAYS HAPPENS TO ME BUT I DONT BITCH~

[Slipt]

UPPIN
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[Laureate]

opener: verse
closer: slipt
structure: verse
flow: verse
personals: verse, slipt had none
punches: tie
metas: slipt
win: verse112
Verse had the better overall verse. Slipt dun put spaces between bars and get rid of the fuckin //~ shit