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    Respect Me

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    "Respect Me"

    [Verse 1]
    A 16 year old more potent than acapulco gold
    I'll make your vocals fold, shut up and behold
    I dismiss mc's and throw 'em in a deep abyss
    I'll bullet kiss anyone who wanna step to this
    The only mastermind to compose such rhymes
    It feels i'm better than the rest by 1,000 times
    Step back, you're in my zone of constant impact
    I'm coming at my allies with a diversionary attack
    Welcome to the future, how does it suit ya?
    Bitch tell me what I wanna hear before I shoot ya
    Ya unstable, days numbered like the periodic table
    Mp~Phasiz got da power to set your life on disable
    I'm off my rocker and it shouldn't be a shocker
    I have more skill than Michael Jordan's had lockers
    Starts when my pen copies the thoughts of my heart
    I produce incredible art, that's what sets us apart

    [Chorus x2]
    Y'all better show appreciation for what i've done
    Recognize i've saved our nation and then some
    I'm the creation of rap and was birthed from a gun
    Y'all better respect me, each and every one

    [Verse 2]
    There was once a guy who thought he was tough
    And interestingly enough he's dead and i'm in cuffs
    What do I gotta do to prove my words are true?
    Do I really have to walk up and put a gun to you?
    It was found empirical that i'm a child born miracle
    Expose your flaws for the rest of us to redicule
    And skin is only upholstery to clothe human souls
    Burn you readily and watch like bituminous coal
    I specialize in statistics, a mathematical statistician
    Ya mind outta commission, body in an unfavorable position
    Give credit where it's due i'm a better rapper than you
    In relation to my career give it an analytical review
    Who's responsable for the widely hip-hop rapport?
    Skill don't matter no more it's 'bout money galore
    If there is a heaven somewhere above space
    Than i will give grace while others go to a lower place

    [Chorus x2]
    Y'all better show appreciation for what i've done
    Recognize i've saved our nation and then some
    I'm the creation of rap and was birthed from a gun
    Y'all better respect me, each and every one

    [Verse 3]
    Just the thought of falling off makes me distraught
    I'm chasing my dream and it's bound to get caught
    It's like i'm writin in brail, I don't see things I feel them
    My messenge is distorted, unclear like an opaque gem
    Expect the unexpected when ya dealin with Mp~Phasiz
    Cause if ya fail to realize only a few true rappers exist
    Many seem to think skill flows through the mainstream
    But that's an extreme, the industrie's supreme scheme
    I'm equally the same as Brother Ali, quality is my policy
    I'm exceptionally colorful and skillfully scented like potpourri
    Tell the media to stop followin me, there's nothin here to see
    Except for corpses and debris of mc's who challenged me
    I aint ever gonna fade out cause hip-hop is what i'm about
    Without a shadow of doubt i'm the illest seed ever to sprout
    It's like I run by clockwork because I don't miss a tick
    I'd rather die right today than live a life without music

    [Chorus x2]
    Y'all better show appreciation for what i've done
    Recognize i've saved our nation and then some
    I'm the creation of rap and was birthed from a gun
    Y'all better respect me, each and every one
    Last edited by And Death; January 3rd, 2004 at 03:25 PM

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    you got alot of skillz in rhyme structure wordplay and delivery but i feel something still lacked im not sure what but it is missing something
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    damn...this was actually a really hot piece, it flowed good through out, had some good vocab i liked the wordplay and meaning to this your openings and clsings to verses were pretty good All in all great dop...yo could you hit my battle up thats in my sig its bein slept on...thanks apreciate it if ye do pz
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    i liked this i feel ur emotion
    i'd give it 8.5/10 nice shit keep spittin

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    Thanks...

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    Uppin!

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    Yeah i agree with them...this was a real nice piece, it was worth the read i thought, well done....The structure in this was real nice i thought, structure it well...The flow in the piece was real nice through out it, it stayed on point through out the piece....You vocab was good, nothing was wrong with it.....The chorus was pretty good as well...overall this was a good piece...keep at it.

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    Over all that was really nice. I liked the chorus it flowed pretty well. Alothough in some parts you used some words that got it out of flow a little like this---"I'm coming at my allies with a diversionary attack
    Welcome to the future...hows does it suit ya?"

    You could use this-----I'm coming at my allies with a diversion attack
    Welcome YOU BACK to the future...SO hows does it suit ya?

    Somethin like that hope i helped

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    nice piece MP~Phasiz.................good flow of text, excellent rhyme structure..........most of the cats who already viewed it, hit tha nail..........8.5/10 keep spitting bars
    can I kick it?

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    yea this was hott.....it wasnt messy at all either
    you had a good vocab so we know that u aint rhyming the easy words like cat in the hat
    anyways it was a hott piece

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    great peice i liked your emotions, creativity and imagry. i was really feelin this peice good work dawg..9/10

    return the favor and check out my open mic's

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    really good structure n nice chorus . if ur gonna record that u should add some talkin to introduce n outro i.m.o
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    Nice work, i liked the rhyme scheme, You'll make it places dog keep ur head up, you got great skill. I don't really have constructive critism for this piece it doesn't need it, I just like the 1st and 2nd verses better than the 3rd. The 3rd doesn't flow as well.

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    shit nigga u writtin ya songz guess u aint seen mine
    so picture ma ryme

    VERSE ONE::OPE
    now b shook cuz i was mentally gon
    since tha day i was born
    i was all in pain afta birth
    niggaz neva gave a fuck even tho it hurt
    now they askin why i act they way a nigga doez
    now u know the ansa to this question dont b buzzed
    cuz i was angry wit ma self
    tho the shit cudnt b yo-aint no help
    had no one wit may
    the onez i thot was now i no how tha shit bay
    im goin kinda crazay
    yawl pray to the lord infinite to save may
    cuz Godz ma only help now thankin the way he made may
    cuz slowly the worlz growin against me
    niggaz iz fearin the fuck they dont wanna face me
    was told the truth
    n lied to
    lied by bitchez n niggaz wish I knew!
    why the fuck they planned it out in ma mind shits still livin
    the nigga knowz hez fo eva forgiven
    so y the fuck am i called this
    lost in thots nigga thanx fo tellin me where the hall iz
    n i know niggaz gon b mad cuz this the truest shit i eva wrote
    n i know nigga this the truest shit u'll eva quote!!!

    (CHORUS)
    now holla if ya wit may!!!
    holla if u still wit may!!??
    holla if u still wit may?
    ansa may u still wit me
    tell may niggaz u still wit may?!?!

    VERSE TWO::OPE
    now nigga look had no plan fo the second verse
    but cudnt help it the thots keep gettin worse
    now ima tell ya the rest shit
    i hope u ova came ma blessed shit
    cuz by that shit i feel lordz wit may
    n sumone iz so rite now plz dont get may
    cuz ive bin thru a lot
    the fuck nigga u musta fo-GOT!
    i dont give a fuck cuz i ova came it aint no excuse
    but this games ma only use
    so tell me am i wrong cuz im only bein honest
    its ma job to b one cuz iman artist
    so tell me i aint that too
    n plzz niggaz dont start shit like i dont no no rap thru
    cuz thats what ive bin hearin kinda blindly
    neva known now i know how it happend so kindly
    now tryte put me to a low
    keepz on judgein may n ma dogz yo
    i aint takin no shit but people gettin to ma nervez now
    its like im offin a car n curbz out
    but aint no case a givin up
    gots to fite on nigga that i am juss tellin ya!
    cuz niggaz agains may getcha cut throat
    nigga b aware i aint scared say whatup DOPE

    (CHORUS)
    now holla if ya still wit may!!!
    holla if u still wit may!!??
    holla if u still wit may?
    ansa may u still wit me
    tell may niggaz u still wit may?!?!

    VERSE THREE::OPE
    nigga havin wicked vizion in ma dreamz
    niggaz u cant picture it even if u wanna tho it seemz
    am i gon nuts all of a sudden ma raps changed
    like shit upside down in ma brain arranged
    so label me fo sumshit i aint done yet
    cant wait till that mental state comezyet
    aint no stoppin to the stress dropin like rain
    the fuck u smokin think im jokin picture ma pain
    but u cant juss do it
    u dont know how its bin thru it
    mean muggin cold hearted fuckin birdz
    do talk lotta bad talk u aint heard
    but this waznt ma case see
    cuz i told ya mine bout shit n even where the place be
    move the fuck up out gimme space i need it
    stick this weed up urz cuz hater i dont do no weed shit
    cuz ive bin thru curse n im cussin
    loss of heart mean ryme bussin
    dont take it personal plz dont mind
    cuz aint ma fault shit keeps runnin thru mine every time
    dont tripp cuz i know i got lota niggaz pissed off
    bitchez iz fo eva lierz now i belive it n shits off!

    (CHORUS)
    now holla if ya still wit may!!!
    nigga holla if u still wit may!!??
    holla if u still wit may?
    ansa may u still wit me
    tell may niggaz u still wit may?!?!

    DOPE TALKIN:::OUTRO
    is u yawl still wit dope? u still wit may? fuck it all tite shit i know u wit may (with may)
    turn the fuck off!

    nigga its me DOPE AKA DEE 1 SICKS AKA TUDOPE T
    IM 15 nigga so picture this
    hearthacker_hh@hotmail.com
    recollec ya thots dont get cot up in tha mix cuz tha mediaz fulla dirty trix, ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME - 2PAC

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    its like i DONT GIV A FUCK BOUT NO ONEZ RESPECT
    WANNA LIKE ME U WIT ME THEN
    N IF DONT THATS WHAT EVERYONE DOEZ HE A HATER
    SO CUT THIS U WANNA TALK BOUT SONGZ THEN IMA TELL YA THE TRUTH I GOT 89 SONGZ IN 2 MONTHZ SO HOW THAT FEEL
    HAHAH DOPE GON HAVE MA TRU PICTURE REVEALED
    recollec ya thots dont get cot up in tha mix cuz tha mediaz fulla dirty trix, ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME - 2PAC

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