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    [- Waste of breath..Ft Fgee -]

    Waste of breath..

    Edicius

    I'm gonna get drunk , so fuckin drunk ill pass out
    but b4 that lettin u in my life and shout it out loud!
    I geuss we must give theres not an other thing to do
    just take a look at the world, and take a good look at the zoo!
    Caged souls die daily from wrong judgements and a twisted truth
    we all prisoners in this fucked up society but do we see? no! rather jump of a roof
    Than handle situations, we all run but still we stay trapped
    and than friends ..so called, if necessary they have u stabbed
    There's bein givin a lifetime to the human race by.. themselfs
    Like a fish in a bowl swimmin round an round
    everyday the same he sick of it! but doesnt make a sound
    Becuz he can't his future is allready set..
    cuz we dicided what he can and can't and made this bowl his death bed..
    Who are we?..we are that fish!
    We a waste of time, all the time..al we do is struggle to survive,
    but the at the end its over why?..we have bein put in this thing called life?
    Seeing the light , growin up struggle to survive and than i die!
    all this hard work to ''live'' but for what? it just makes me cry
    i try to make something of my life and still it ends with death
    walking around just to end up in a box, what a waste of breath..

    With my visions and my feelins paintin the streets the colour of my heart


    Fgee

    Aches and the pains over cloud my drowsy days
    A long face weary from the constant reigns taste
    An empire of waste brains cogs rusted and grating
    Speeches migration seems for ever patient
    Faded and jaded by a frozen tongue lacking words
    Adjectives, nouns and verbs escape lungs surge
    An ironic gifted curse and my breath lacks mettle
    Oxygen settled and exhaled in torsos threshold
    Nectarless petals of vapour escape from my mouth
    Defining doubt all breathing whispers a shout
    Contained drought parched my soul now u see cracks
    Existence slapped and red from the constant hits
    Embarassing skits of a person who cant speak clearly
    Wasted breath nearly ceases but air fears me
    Loved dearly but it cant fight my battles of silence
    So unspoken emotions…are construed by violence

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    Young black
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    Set-ignorance

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    This piece was hot , both MCs stayed on topic. The rhyme scheme was iLL and Fgee's content was nice!!!!Overall this was a sick collab

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    nice shit dogg

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    it's a bold statement - the new youtube

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    NICE SHIT.nice collab,nice words

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    Pff


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    it's a bold statement - the new youtube

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    Omg ..


    Can we get some decent replys plz

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    damn, this bein slept on...but a very thought out poem, great vocab from both..it had a canstant photo of feeling showing good thoughts on this....great flow and structure....good drop....9/10, pz
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    Thnx

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    Nice shit dawg

    Fgee's really was a waste of breath .. and time .. and effort

    holla!

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    yeah i agree both these verses were tight.....nice topic and stuck too good......both well structured....although i prefered edicius's flow.....some nice vocab......all round well put together...liked it.....Pz
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    Lol @ cam..

    Thnx all Upp3r..^

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