Alrigh normal rules apply, and verses due 15 minutes from when executive checks in...... .
Good Luck dawg
executive
cameronj86
Alrigh normal rules apply, and verses due 15 minutes from when executive checks in...... .
Good Luck dawg
aight checking in.......................
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yo cameron is like a ~power outage~ cuz he lacks ~energy/
this bitch is pointless like fighting his own shadow in the ~dark~ to surprise his an enemy/
this idiot couldn’t ~connect~ a punch if he was boxing the bag/
so I’m gunna leave this “bitch bleeding like slut with no ~plug~ for the rag/
leaving him useless like a burned out ~outlet~ with no ~apparent flow~/
stopping his tracks like a walkman with the batteries running a transparent ~low~/
to ~re-connect~ his style you need a whole ~power plant~ 4 it to regain power/
his active ~discharge~ is a weakness and even after re charging he runs out in half an hour/
now Cameron listen for a final hit to split vocal chords~ and articulate illnesses to spread in ur anatomy like cancer cells~/
Intel’s~ of spells circulating ur body like used condoms in sleazy motels/
aight u should be dropng in less then 2 min............................................... .................................................. .....................................
Battlin executive now and tek later cuz they from the same crew
Y'all wack too, I'll "shape up ya team" when I "jump-n-jack you"
Y'all just cheatin to win, but ya whole crew I can handle
Fuck a scandal, u two "split de-feet" like "open-toed sandals"
Executive alias is "the bad guy"... I've never heard of such
Maybe from animal rights cuz he chokes his chicken too much
"Dawg" ya played-out so I'm puttin you down like Old Yella, baby
You David and I'm Goliath...about to "Roc-a-fella betta than Jay-z"
ya sigs talkin bout never-ending war with me... makes no sense
Now you gotta "die for nothing" like seniors without life insurance
Alright there's my drop...
Well...
Pretty Close Battle Actually...
Executive...
Had Dis Wit Punches Tho...
Dey Wuz Just A Bit Betta...
Really Liked It...
Vote...Executive...
No Hate...
-P
well X
your verse was of tha hook with nice punches and the flow was almost dead on
structure was nice and vocab was great.
C
your shit was nice no dout but alot of your punches and flow was forced (na i mean) but other than that shit was a nice ass battle
But i'd have to give it to X for this line (shit was hot)
yo cameron is like a ~power outage~ cuz he lacks ~energy/
this bitch is pointless like fighting his own shadow in the ~dark~ to surprise his an enemy/
still hatin the dickriders
and still pointin M out
Executive took this battle with much better punches..
flow-ex
punches-ex
worplay-tie
meta's-ex
multies-tie
overall-ex
opener - ex
closer - cam
wordplay - tie
punches - ex
personals - tie
vocab - cam
overal - ex
hit up my battle its elevated against rapid fire
with honest vote
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I vote executive.....
reasons being that his verse was more complex....he had a few good punchlines too.....cameron had a few nice punches too but they was just too simple in this battle....neither verse was bad tho...both were pretty dope..but I say Executive took this...
hit up my battle with Emerge w/ a dickryde vote for me (lmao...don't take that seriously)
peace
I.J.L.
executive for the wordplay, and his flow.
da's mah vote, but it wuz a close call, too.
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by the way, can ya hit dis up wit an honest vote?
"Johnny C. vs. Transmogrify"
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upping upping...
come on people lets not forget tp poll this should be over now...6-0 but people dont poll
hit this up after man with an honest vote.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93655 ..
ite this is it,
opener - ex
closer - ex
wordplay - ex
punches - ex
personals - cam
vocab - cam
overal - ex
gd battle yall.............................................. ....close............pz
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yo dogg looks like the polls are fucked up again cus i cant vote.report it man.soz........................................... .................................................. .pz
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