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  1. November 19th, 2003, 07:05 PM #1
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    Alyss (Nothing Can Be Everything)

    [B]Camarac, Word P. 13 D

    Nothing Can Turn Out Tobe
    Everything Even Fill The Empty
    Say What You Do, Do What You Say
    Pray Today, For Tomorrow Could Delay

    Incredible How The Glass Is Motionless Yet So Easy To Shatter
    Unexceptable The Amount Of Mass Situations That Don't Matter
    Do You Tolerate The Visable Or Only Believe Untruthful Words
    That Could Leave You Miserable Slice You With Verbal Swords
    Powerful Creatures Killin Lives, Createn Actions That Are Dispized
    Prayers And Wishes Paralized No Longer Loved Or Mesmerized
    Boundries In Life Are Hazerdous As The Taste Of Polluted H-2-O
    Createn Acid Rain As Thus Disapearing The Atmisphere Tomorrow
    Chrostaphobic I'm In'a life Sin, Searching For A Meaning To Begin
    No Chance To Win Do You Hear Me Screaming From The Demond
    Every Aspect I Dun Love Promoted To A Love That Was Lost
    How Can I Move This Thug When I'm Stuck On Pause
    Rule The Heavonly angle Restricted Though I Have No Believers
    How Thoughtful, I've Been Chewed Like Trees From Beavers
    People Who Understand Do Right No Promises For Breath
    Married To A Hard Life These Obsticles Make Me Feel Wet
    Drownding In'a Chance Is worthy Loan It Some Respect
    Life's A Gun Story, Be Thankful God Hasn't Capped You Yet

    HOOk*

    I've Had My Ups & Downs As Many Times As'a Functional Elavator
    I'm Realistic A Simple Clown Pulled From Lifes Journy Escalator
    Life Pulled Through Like A Gage Amazed By hate Devilish Elimator
    Forcing inacent Kids To Suicide Remote to Blood On The Carpet
    Following in The Trail Guide To Death Cause Of'a Torror Started
    On There Provided Birth A Sence Revealing ToBe Disparted
    Raised To Believe If You don't Make It You Aint Apreciated
    Caught In'a Dream Where Hell Is Blocked & Peace Isn't Gated
    The Rule Was Never Leathal I Had Conflicts Certain Yeilds
    But I Aint Like Most People I Dominate On Certian Feilds
    It Enhances The Flower Adapts To Life Eats Rays Then Blooms
    I Free Lance To The Power Serving 0 For 2 Creatin Typhoons
    Im'a Natural Disaster Sentancing Envy To A State Of Hex
    Think Of The Matter Your Actions Like Unprotected Sex
    It Aint a Criminal Affence For Reaching Your Full Potential
    Jump The Higher Fence Posably More Radiant For Profesional
    Tomorrow Isn't Promised So Don't Complain like'a Coward
    Leave People Outstondished Feel Like you Wren't Over Powered
    Critisize My Results Ripping Layers Of Tissue From My Ego
    Fertilize My Palse Mistaken My Thoughtly Cantagious Flow
    Don't Think Teens Don't Have A Risk Why You Bein Sarcastic
    Blood Leakin Out The Mortal Wriste, FUCK IT, Prepare The Casket
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  2. November 20th, 2003, 07:17 AM #2
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    uppen....this is being slept on like crazy.....c'mon...
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  3. November 20th, 2003, 07:49 AM #3
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    "Boundries In Life Are Hazerdous As The Taste Of Polluted H-2-O
    Createn Acid Rain As Thus Disapearing The Atmisphere Tomorrow"

    this line is very thoughtful an creates a siniter effect, My mind instantly illustrates a image of poverty, coruption, struggle an hope... this line alone made this peice what it is ...

    "I've Had My Ups & Downs As Many Times As'a Functional Elavator
    I'm Realistic A Simple Clown Pulled From Lifes Journy Escalator"

    Strong opening to the second verse an I like the very relivent hook..

    good lookin' uppin' for feed back on my suffering from nostalgia track which can relate to dis... overall 9/10
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  4. November 20th, 2003, 07:51 AM #4
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    da link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92620
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  5. November 20th, 2003, 03:56 PM #5
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    thanks uppen....
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  6. November 20th, 2003, 08:44 PM #6
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    uppen dun sleep stay up b-e-z
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  7. November 21st, 2003, 07:58 AM #7
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    stop sleepin...feedbac would be apreciated thanks pz
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  8. November 21st, 2003, 05:07 PM #8
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    hit this up....
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  9. November 22nd, 2003, 01:11 AM #9
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    damn i've uppen this like 5 times and nothing..i give feed...cc''mmoon
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  10. November 22nd, 2003, 01:51 AM #10
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    This was a hot piece i gotta give it to you, you had vocab and some dope flow in this piece keep it coming mang 1..

    Powerful Creatures Killin Lives, Createn Actions That Are Dispized
    Prayers And Wishes Paralized No Longer Loved Or Mesmerized
    Boundries In Life Are Hazerdous As The Taste Of Polluted H-2-O
    Createn Acid Rain As Thus Disapearing The Atmisphere Tomorrow
    Chrostaphobic I'm In'a life Sin, Searching For A Meaning To Begin
    No Chance To Win Do You Hear Me Screaming From The Demond
    Every Aspect I Dun Love Promoted To A Love That Was Lost
    How Can I Move This Thug When I'm Stuck On Pause
    Rule The Heavonly angle Restricted Though I Have No Believers
    How Thoughtful, I've Been Chewed Like Trees From Beavers
    Nice..
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  11. November 22nd, 2003, 05:02 PM #11
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    uppen this i've had 2 people reply...damn
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  12. November 25th, 2003, 05:13 PM #12
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    wow...nothing at all...lookin for some feedback...c'mon now
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  13. November 25th, 2003, 05:52 PM #13
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    i liked it but i tend to like all your shit you got a gift to capture attention for your skillz
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  14. November 25th, 2003, 07:26 PM #14
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    thanks man...pz
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