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  1. November 19th, 2003, 11:31 AM #1
    f-gee
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    i'm at a loose end where futility extends its hand in false pretence
    self pity is lost on friends
    lifes an expense i cant afford the rent so i intend to right the wrongs work
    i begin to search for some meaning behind the shirt
    where my heart bursts
    dispersed emotions blurt..incoherent words to the cardiac beat
    keep my ears to the street
    tarmacced dreams recede only to rise again and compete
    an athlete in lifes track meat
    tryin to hail a dastardly taxi to short cut a cowards trail
    pace of a snail my freshness gone stale internal demons prevailed
    hopes rocked and impaled
    betrayal by transparent brick wallls which resist the fall
    dead end squalls maul
    my thoughts which resort to wars and seemingly eternal pause
    meaningless scores biased applause as i jump thru hoops
    every shot raises the roof
    im living proof of playground rules which create the big news
    but its insular views fused by a concrete surface, ball and ring
    all in all it stings
    as i bounce i flinch shot up baskets grimace as glory is glimpsed
    but its hopeless to think
    that practice will shrink the gap of ability which could fulfill me
    instilled with in me to be rid of misery but i cant physically
    perform mind and body at liberty
    but the conflicts arent willing to peace the puzzle the same
    personality traits fuck up my game
    and at the end of the day...im just another baller trying to make myself a name
    You need Ghost Dog in your DVD collection


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  2. November 19th, 2003, 11:34 AM #2
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    replied to edicius potient and 13th
    You need Ghost Dog in your DVD collection


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  3. November 19th, 2003, 11:39 AM #3
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    yeah its straight dog, but i wanna battle you dude, why is bitch slapped not on here no more but? for your piece i would suggest usin some multis, and match up the lines but ya came wit detail and explained ya shit, but i do want to battle you i'll set it up you spit first, check in
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  4. November 19th, 2003, 11:53 AM #4
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    the flow on this was dope, i was feeling the different tempos, you've just got to know when to pick it up, i picked this up really easily, content was this was really good, some liens seemed a bit long, without inners, but thats no major problem. .Pz
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  5. November 19th, 2003, 04:34 PM #5
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    Nice drop, but try to be more specific when you say things like this. Tell a story. Don't just complan that you feel like shit.
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  6. November 19th, 2003, 04:58 PM #6
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    ^ agreed with him.. the flow wasnt great... i was aite... work on some things... try to include dope punches in open mics, theyre effective. str8 drop.
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  7. November 19th, 2003, 05:10 PM #7
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    its clear u all know what ur talking about
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  8. November 19th, 2003, 08:02 PM #8
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    What everyone else said man. This was dope. The flow was tight but you were off on a few lines but keep it up. I've seen better from you Fgee. Keep spittin.

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  9. November 19th, 2003, 08:27 PM #9
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    Dope Piece Fgee. Most Of The Piece Had Great Flow, So I Enjoyed Readin It. The Flow Was Off In Some Places, But That Didn't Hinder My Readin, I Jus Picked It Back Up N Kept Goin. Like Potent Said, Some Lines Seemed Stretched Maybe To The Point Where They Didn't Need To Be, But I Overlooked It. Good And Consistent Vocab Throughout, Multi's Made The Piece Even Better. Overall, Real Good Drop Man, But I've Seen Better. Keep Um Comin Aight.

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  10. November 19th, 2003, 08:34 PM #10
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    Originally posted by skitten
    Nice drop, but try to be more specific when you say things like this. Tell a story. Don't just complan that you feel like shit.
    yea she nows whats she's talkin bout peep hers but yea it was ight 7.5/10
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  11. November 20th, 2003, 08:43 AM #11
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    ^err....an neither do u
    than ks for the feedback though
    You need Ghost Dog in your DVD collection


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