-Brixton- vs Rob D (topical)

[Rob D]

topic - when darkness falls.
due date - this sunday at midnight.
unlimited lines.

check in as soon as you see this.

let me no if you have a problem with the topic.

good luck kid.

[Judge Judy]

check in......no probs with topic
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[Judge Judy]

first topical in f.lines for me...ima key it..fuk it why not?
15 lines.........here i go

Desperate Intensions In The Night Like My Brightness Been Burnt.... By The Switch Of A Light
Its An Insight, Into How Much Pleasure You Get From A Feeling That Dont Feel Quite Right
So Much Uncomfartable Tension, Jus Coz My Sight Can't Open Up To Take A Mention
Its In Detention...Jus Suspended, It'll Be Back Before Peeps Start To Gimme Attention
Or Back Within A Week,But Thangs Are Lookin Bleak..Feel Enough Fury Yet I Feel So Weak
I Hear A Creek But Still I See Nothing, Is It A Stranger Comin At Me Or A Relation Showing Loving
Coz I Can't Tell..I Hear Breaths But No Words..Feeling Heat From The Bodies Like An Oven....
Every Single Sense In Place, But I Still Crave The Ability To See..To Match The Attributes On Ma Face
Been Called A Disgrace By Peeps Who Know No Better..Than To Enter Me In A Blindmans Race
But I Don't Hold No Grudges, I Just Try Tom Show Talent To Get Rated By The Judges
I Got Myself Creeping Through The Bushes...Jus To Get A Chance Of Sparing My Own Blushes
But I Dont Rush It....Coz Cataract Is A State Of Mind Aswell As A Biological Condition
Trying To Rectify Myself..By Imposing A Life Insouled Beat...Not A Bitten Rendition
Divine Intervention.. Stole The Point Of Return To Lead An Open And Possible Normal Life
No More Eye Ache..A Little Less Strife... Maybe In The Future I'll See The Kids N The Wife
But For Now...I'll Jus Reside Myself To Gaining Conversation N Sight From A Wall
Explaination Of The Bitterness N Sanity Of What Happens When Darkness Falls

[Rob D]

First in frontlines for me aswell. Thanks for the extra time Brix, i just had a few problems,anyway heres my piece. 12 lines.



When Darkness Falls


burgulars attack...under the cover of darkness,
sky pitch black...allows escape with minimal fuss,
targeting the weak...old people & single women,
the futures bleek...they should never be forgivin,
punished eternally...prison is not sufficent,
dealt with sternly...why go about it different,
devestation to victims...should be paid back 10 fold,
just the beginning...think of the many crimes untold,
traumtised people...having to fight to survive,
touched by evil...now scared to go outside,
bullets showered...innocence slaughtered like mules,
these cowards...only strike When Darkness Falls

[Judge Judy]

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[Richard Parker]

all votes cleared... polls reset... right now i am investigating a d/r claim that seems valid. maybe some banning... DO NOT vote on this again if you were one of those that did before i cleared the polls. i know who you are...

[Rob D]

Brix is a d/r?

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[Judge Judy]

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my god..coz some chump in this battle based it on punches
you coulda jus deleted his vote..........
damn
uppin............................................. ...........1st

[Judge Judy]

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[Rob D]

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[Rob D]

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[Rob D]

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[Rob D]

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[Judge Judy]

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