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Thread: Emergency. . . *Best Piece I've Penned*

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    Emergency. . . *Best Piece I've Penned*

    ** Replied To:
    Aisle 5- Don't Push Me
    Deva- The Way It Should Be
    Masta C Feat. Gene Pool- Lies **

    I know it's a long read, but trust me, it's worth it.

    A heart monitor is heard. . . regular shit. . . no sign of problems. . . then suddenly. . . The Flatline is heard. . .

    Help. . . Unity. . . We need to overcome this shit. . . This is a fucking Emergency. . .

    We are doubted, They never gave and will never give a shit about it
    Doubt our talent, so the hate just isn't balanced
    That's childish, how you gonna hate what you ain't heard?
    No I dont't go to church, N those words just making it worse
    Ya'll said we wouldn't make it, debated it, opinions never changed
    If ya'll hate us so much, then why ya'll always speakin our names?
    Beef with the game, All I hear is bitchin about Explicit Content
    That's non sense, This shit is constant, N becoming a threat
    It ain't like I'm gunnin with techs, Fuck, I don't even own a gun
    I'm jus tryna get reality through the heads of ya sons
    And girls, who are far too much exposed to the fake in this world
    It's not case-closed, why you tryna bury our music?
    I know, 'cause the last time I checked MC's were the biggest influence
    But this shit gotta stop, you fucks gotta leave us alone
    'Cause I don't wanna be writin a track N hear I gotta pack N go home

    [Chorus]
    So This Is My Plea, To All MC's in this industry
    They Killin Us See?, This Is A Real Fuckin Emergency
    Urgency, Urging, All Ya'll Aritists To Take A Stand
    Here's A Hand, Stand Up, Fight With Me Man

    Look, Right where I stand, I see insurmountable odds
    Squad cars, Rappers shot, Soon we outta of job
    Through My eyes in the corner, it's Parents with Picket Signs
    Dickless mimes, Complainin about all the bad words in our rhymes
    Well don't listen, for you, this was not intended
    I for one am not bendin to satisfy this fuckin system
    You got alternatives: Country, Pop, N R@B
    We gotta clear these hurdes but safety still far from reach
    Homeland security ain't securing me
    I'm worried see, and wonder why we don't have Rap-Front security
    You're Dope Man, my boys is reassuring me
    But the jury for rap music never heard it, I'll never see my purgery
    This is a real fuckin Emergency, we can't take they words for granted
    We were handed a gift, they shit on us, I can't stand it
    So let's fight, unite N battle with two feet planted

    [Chorus]

    This is my 911 call for help, an MC answer please
    'Cause chances these dudes won't leave us cancer-free
    Has Skyrocketed, they pick-pocketing us for dignity
    Are ya Kiddin Me? Why the fuck are we are the enemy?
    'Cause we use our First Amendment right of free speech?
    This ain't free teach, we go to great lengths to get our message out
    You curse my penship, God's ya witness?
    That's good, but notice we never complain when ya put ya blessings out
    That's real shit, I see that Parental Advisory is nothing
    Cause Parents are blarin' it, our music they choose it N curse us for cussing
    Ain't that somethin? I'm guessin that's why sales is high on SoundScan
    They sayin' "Look What Found" listen then "Damn"
    We may say grab a knife N fight, but that's not as bad as it sounds man
    Take into consideration the number of kids picked on in this Nation
    Face it, don't fake it, It's too fuckin basic
    Cause basically we tellin um, to fight is right to rid of the hatred
    We don't gotta, we gonna clear this hurdle N make it
    Before you get judgmental and hate this
    Look to the internal of these fucking statements

    [Chorus]

    Listen to what i'm sayin, we are in major fucking danger of losing the shit we love to do, we gotta come together. . .

    The Flatline turns into a heartbeat. . .

    Unity. . .

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    Ya'll know what it's about. Feedback Appreciated.

    -Formula.
    Last edited by FormulaMC; November 9th, 2003 at 12:37 AM

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    Nice peice..nice concept ya stay on topic for the whole peice...flows on point n all tht shit..feelin most of it..get this shit to audio..its nice

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    yeah.. flow was on point, the lyrics is dope, you got a nice multi structure.. and it sound like one of nas's joints.

    keep 'em commin plya
    holla one.

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    Hmm This Was Decent.. The Flow Was Real Nice In The Beggining. But It Kinda Lost Me After That. Topic Was Very Nice, And You Stayed With It Very Very Well. Keep Droppin Man And Stay Up.

    Wun.

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    Thanks for the feed, it's appreciated.

    *Plays B2K's Bump Bump Bump*

    Wrd.

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    yo nyce Peice dawg keep that commin aiight Peace (v)

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    *Bump Bump Bump is still playing*

    Lemme See This Dope Ass Track Go Bump Bump Bump. . . That Is All I Wanna See, Repliers Show Me. . .

    Wrd.

    -Formula.

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    bumpbumpbump and b2k are stupid they should be called b2gay

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    fuckin' dope man, first verse was the best, keep on postin', it was so good, you could've made it longer

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