You Are Tough Eh?

[bloodshedd]

you think u know best jus
because u spit one good verse
conversating wit me about
ur bran new purse
i see soo many intellectual minds
spreading their dangerious rhymes
they burst flowing shredding peepz
while leaving their remains to a nurse
all u catz with strong fire be
manupilating my mind
telling me to sloww down cause
they don't know about ma rhymes
but i keep building taking in the
advice of the "wise"
the anguish i have building inside
i'm a gunna, i ain't afraid to get stunned
when i flow i ain't never afraid to get bunned
but get me angry is crutial u'll get runned
let me hear wat u have to say bout this
shit i showned

[Sublime D]

ok ok,. that was aiight...you coudl work on the flwo a lil bit, i can tell from the flow you have this is supposed to go a lil slow which is cool, that's your style, but soem of your end syllabel rhymes were so so at best, work on your rhyming some, your message was solid, i felt it, your vocab was a lil young but that's cool too, work on the rhymes, get soem battles, (im up for whenever) up ya rep and ull be fine

[set-ignorance]

HE means overall "good drop" Peace

[Blackflags]

This Piece Sucked Dude....u SERIOUSLY Need To Up Your Wordplay.....Throw In Some Multis....Add Some Imagery.......Think Hard.....


DoPeYz.

[Bruklor]

Your replies to others?

[Ken Dawg]

Little weak..will excuse it though..just work on wordplay and elevate..will all come with time..later peace

[-uski-]

it was aiight dawg it still needs work and shit try putting in multis and make tha lines a bit longer


Aiight Peace (v)