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    suicide (what would u do?)

    Suicide

    [intro]
    yo…I just want…every motherfucking body…to understand...the pain...of losing a friend...and I want...everybody...to know...I have felt the pain...and still feel it...and i wanna tell yáll...i didn’t give a fuck...when my grandpa...jumped...under a train...and I think that...the driver of that train...is a hero...haha...yo

    [verse 1]
    have you ever felt how fucked up it is to have a friend killing himself/
    and if you hear the only thing you want is blow everybody away with a couple off shells/
    i keep spittin shit for my dawgs straight outta my motherfuckin soul/
    to all my dead homie’s...rest in peace y’all/
    but to my mom’s father...burn in fuckin hell faggot/
    I wouldn’t even EAT ya, if I was a hungry maggot/
    But I’m human if you know what that means hoe/
    I don’t wanna be family of this fucking homo/
    I you was still alive I would’ve beat yo brain out on the flo/
    But did I want you to kill yourself?...NO/
    I wanted myself to kill ya bitch, with my bare hands yo/

    [chorus]
    (suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/
    (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/
    (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/
    (suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/

    [verse 2]
    I wasn’t on your funeral you worthless motherfucker, cuz there was no funeral and I had too much fun/
    Yo faggot-ass can I ask you how many of your children love you? That’s an easy question...none/
    Yeah, we all hate you, period, done/
    Let’s talk about one of my friends that killed himself too/
    Not that I’m gonna diss HIM, he’s koo, peace to you!/
    Thirteen years old he was, didn’t know what the futer might bring, not telling the truth/
    You could have been here still/
    But now my stomach and head are spinnin like a windmill/
    What was your fuckin reason to kill/ (yourself)
    I admitt I cried for u a while and had some pills/
    Even though you’re not here anymore, I still got respect for you, you’re ill/

    [chorus]
    (suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/
    (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/
    (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/
    (suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/



    [verse 3]
    suicide is a fucked up thing, G/
    peeps don’t think twice for they jump,cut,bleed, or shoot and feel the heat/
    i had suicidal tendeeys a couple of times, but I thought homie!/
    and it worked cuz I’m still here as you can probably see/
    too bad it doesn’t work for everybody, cuz it’s just fucked up if you go to school and peeps ask, sup?/
    and that you’ve gotta answer that you feel fucked-up/
    and tell that a friend killed himself and they ask, what?/
    if I cried they laughed cuz they never felt the pain dawg/
    they’re livin a good life whit happy parents and shit, fuck/
    and I told these little mothafuckas, what would do if your friend just died/
    bitch nigga...you allso would’ve cried/

    [chorus]
    (suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/
    (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/
    (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/
    (suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/
    (what?)
    (suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/
    (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/
    (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/
    (suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/
    (once again)
    (suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/
    (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/
    (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/
    (suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/
    (yeah)

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    uppin

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    damn that shit was deep as hell,
    and i think i know how you feel cuz my brother killed himself
    over shit .... i rate that shit 9/10

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    yo dawg som tight shit aiight ill give a 5/5 for everything dawg that shit was awesome.


    Aiight Peace (v)....{/]~{UsKi}~[\

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    thanx y'all...

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    wow. this was the best fucking open mic i've seen in a long time. i think real talent is here. i hate that line in verse three though. too bad it doesn’t work for everybody, cuz it’s just fucked up if you go to school and peeps ask, sup?/
    Maybe you should make it a little shorter. Truthfully, this sounds like an Em song, which is cool. it could actually be produced.

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    good topic... but your hook kinda went astray... other than
    that.. you stayed on course pretty well... Im liking the emotion
    you put forth into this... keep droppin... this was a good peice...
    soon, you'll be one of the top open mic heads in here...
    ~AshY~
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    could u reply to mine?

    devil's walking stick

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    uppin

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    i can relate to dis one. good job.

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    deeper than lil kim would take down her throat (as I say)
    good concept an one thing you managed to do is make people feel like a relative to your work which in somewhat is hard to pull off... good read... good idea... structured rather well

    = good post

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    deeper than lil kim would take down her throat (as I say)
    ^haha...lol

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    Nice, liked the emotional input, other than that 3/5 it was alrite Peace (produce it? rite) Peace
    "Blood 4 Lyf"... "S'happenin mah dawg? .. Got nuttin but love 4 you.."

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    thanx I apreciate

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