MaRiO Vs YoUnG_PlAyA

[YoUnG-PlAyA]

rules

10 lines max
5 lines min
no d/r
no hate votes
3-0 k.o
5-0 murda

check in and spitt 1st or blind spitt after 1hour max

good luck (u'll need it)

[MaRiO]

ok im checkin in but you have to spit first
ok
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[YoUnG-PlAyA]

mario either spitt first or blind spitt in 1 hour

the spitt is due by 2 : 30 or u a no show

aight just spitt when ur ready

[MaRiO]

ok
then i think that ill spit first i think that ill start after this post
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[YoUnG-PlAyA]

mario am gonna spitt now so start spittin aight i wanna quick battle...........................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!????????????????

[MaRiO]

hey you need to leave your shit a home
listen to what i got to say i mean it when i say
your shit is gay but if you wanna battle me then get
ready to be murded i havent battled much but the shit
i cuss is it so you betta stop dropping your shit
you battle like your an old man trying to keep it old
school but your not cool ok just listen you little tool
man this battle is ova so heres the mic now im handing it ova
to you ok so just stop being gay

[YoUnG-PlAyA]

ma styles like ur waist line its in inflation, u getting played like the sony playstation// u stupid n lame like a junkie, ma flow will eat ya whole like a dairy lee dunkie// am a bust u like the narcotics, leave u shocked like u just had 8 fingaz in plug sockets//mario stick to the nintendo 64, pop u like a pill n leave u to OD on the floor // this shyt making me shine like the stars, u couldnt beat ma 1 line with yo 20 bars// gotta keep ur vital signs down to a minimal, if there was verbal law u'd b a criminal//u think ur mario small fat n wit a tash, but ur just a groupie hoe who tries ta mash // time fo ma style to giv u a notion, this is magic is all cooked up like a potion// so if u think u got flow nuff to defeat me, spitt n let ppl vote n c if u beat me.

let the votes role like i rolled on MaRiO

[Da_Legend]

wow, a wack ass battle, both needs major elevation but i have to give it to YP, basically he made some effort in his punches

but the two of u need to up yer game

vote = YP

hit this battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=88634

[YoUnG-PlAyA]

thanx fo the advice da_legend, but i already no but how else ta do it than battleing peeps, well thats my way n e way

[YoUnG-PlAyA]

uppin 4 votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^\\//\\//estside

[El Chapo]

wack battle no need to explain but Yp got this better verse and punches were nicer wack setup hollaz

[Dominator]

Young owned this cat.....

Inflation/Playstation line was the best line in the battle... that woulda beat Marios verse by itself.... anyways

Flow- Young
Punches- Young
Structure- Mario
Wordplay- Young...

Overall: Young

And break that shit up into 1 bars = 2 lines like everyone else does..... that shits sloppy

[Dominator]

Its saying I didnt post an explation so lemme post again and see if I can vote... if not well i cant yet i gues...


100 char.............................................. ...........

[Born To Kill]

Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

Huh? What? Oh...

Fell asleep reading this shit.

Just fuckin with ya'll

But this battle was pretty sad, gentlemen.

I'll give format to Mario...

But every other catagory went to Playa hands down.

Punches, Metas, Wordplay...

Seriously, though...

Change that horrendous format and get some complexity, please.

Peace

[Yaz]

playa all da way.... ive seen this italion boi get his ass riped 2 now, like damn dat gotta hurt. but fo sure playa took this wit his punchs and flow and well everything fuck