User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 14 of 14

Thread: Audio of the Week: Writeous - Sunrise

  1. #1

    Sunrise (The Morning) - My First Solo Track in Three Years

    Yep, its been about three years since I made a full solo track :-/. Enjoy... *edit* Soundclick is working now.

    http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...ID=643822&q=Lo

    http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...ID=643822&q=Hi

    http://www.soundclick.com/util/Downl....cfm?ID=643822

    I did so many takes of this that I kind of lost my voice(which damn near always seems to happen to me), so I didnt pronounce shit as well. So here are the lyrics for you.

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/Lyri...&songid=643822

  2. #2
    You've Earned a Custom Title! TheWholeTruth's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2003
    Location
    South Minneapolis
    Age
    39
    Posts
    126
    Battle Record
    5-1
    yo...this shit is dope as fuck..love the beat..who made it? ya flow is rippin this track man...im lovin ya lyrical content...for this bein ya first track in 3 years...its dope...im fellin the hook...this is one of the better things i've heard on this site...mad props man..this shit is mad nice...


    .peace.

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.


    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.


    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

  3. #3
    ^^^ Thanks for the props, I really appreciate it. Its not the first track I've done in three years though, but just the first full solo. I usually do nothing but collabs or one minute songs with no hooks :-/ .

  4. #4
    3rd Inf
    Guest
    this shit is hot only a few words that werent that clear but i liekd this

  5. #5
    Is Gettin' Busy. Orikle's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2003
    Location
    Sydney
    Age
    38
    Posts
    1,414
    Battle Record
    11-7
    Fucking like WOAH! That Beat Is Mashin Then you laced it dope as fuck with everything man..I reckon ya delivery was pretty much straight on..no different to what we used to for real..Lyricism ill as ever...That Hook is fucken Top Shelf hahah got me bouncin hahaha...Fucken iLL Man for real..Where the Fucks that CD!? Haha...Good On ya Mun...Pz...
    <center>Artificial Intelligence.</center>
    <center>
    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
    </center>
    <center>
    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
    </center>

  6. #6
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Jun 2003
    Location
    North VA
    Age
    45
    Posts
    63
    i didnt even notice you losing your voice

    this shit was str8 dope

    nothing more to say

    you killed it
    you knowww this
    Drew BuryMore
    aka:DZK


    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

  7. #7
    Dope Wax
    Guest
    Hook was good.. Nice song to just relax too.. It's all happy feel good.. I could understand everything perfectly didn't need the lyrics..

    Should post more stuff like this.

  8. #8
    BlissK22K
    Guest
    Yep, Yep, Yeeeeeeees, some more tight shit. i was startin to wonder about this site but the last 5 or 6 drops i checked have been tight and this is one of the tightest i've heard on here. Good shit. Good vocab display along with an individuality to your flow. You rode the beat nice. I thought the hook could have been better but that's just me bein picky this was quality shit, wanted to give you some constructive critisism too so you can think about some shit to get even tighter. This drop was upper level!!!!

  9. #9
    the medicine man
    Join Date
    Sep 2003
    Location
    UK
    Age
    38
    Posts
    2,921
    Battle Record
    52-34
    this shit is ill as fuck, if u'd bin puttin joints like this out for last 3 years u'd be a legend.

    nice drop, everything was on point, not much bad to say about this shit


    pce

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

    leave feed and a link i'll return it


    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

  10. #10
    hottest shit ive heard on hear in a while

    feelin the style alot

    lyric content is hot

    nice hook

    crazy ass beat

    im jus feelin this track

  11. #11
    Thanks for the replies yall...

  12. #12
    xHellEvatioNx
    Guest
    that is one of the most ill underground tracks i heard.. tight ass beat... fuckin ill... get at me if you wanna collab wit a wack 13 year old white kid from ohio... peace out

  13. #13
    Banned Ginger's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Emerica
    Posts
    2,138
    Battle Record
    21-22
    dope..........beat is nice and chill, flow went perfect with the track...

    you got a sick ass rhyme scheme.........

    like i said dope shit man............

  14. #14
    We off That Kris Cain's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2002
    Location
    Georgia, USA
    Posts
    23,338
    Battle Record
    5-3
    this is aiight man... im not feelin as much as everyone else i guess...

    i like the beat, but its somethin about your delivery that just makes me feel like your reading...

    still pretty mic nonetheless...
    Welcome to reality.

Similar Threads

  1. Meet The Sunrise
    By Brandon Cee in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: December 16th, 2007, 02:04 PM
  2. Week 5 - Elaborate (0 - 0) Vs Writeous One (0 - 0)
    By D.Silver in forum Closed Battles
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: February 3rd, 2007, 12:24 PM
  3. Sunrise
    By D. Josey in forum Poetic Scriptures
    Replies: 8
    Last Post: September 19th, 2005, 06:30 PM

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •