aiiyo
6 lines min
8 lines max
i set up
you spit first
no crew votes
no d/r votes
no b/s votes,
every one this is my second battle ever, i kno a bit about wordplay, structure, multis an stuff because i've spent a lotta time praticing
Suicidal
frozen with heat
aiiyo
6 lines min
8 lines max
i set up
you spit first
no crew votes
no d/r votes
no b/s votes,
every one this is my second battle ever, i kno a bit about wordplay, structure, multis an stuff because i've spent a lotta time praticing
mah bad i took so long...checcin in ill spit now......
fa absolutely no reason i started beafin//speakin at u faster den when puerto ricans be speakin --u aint peepin//
this nigga aint no vet he aint wise enuf ta rhyme wit me//thas why he finna have me spittin first ta combine his style ta me--but still get ate up violently//
im gettin at u like this cuz im tryna make it before da years up//im comin at u more vicious than a pit bull wit bof his ears up--u aint roo tuff//
i bit hard wit tha strength of a great white shark--i rip u apart//mah state of the art lyrical laces is razor sharp//
im ready to expose this cat to y'all... like he a wack 'presentation'/
this dude be hungry for a battle win but gettin beat by starvation/
i treat ya style like the "lottery" your chances of winnin is 'naught'/
you winnin is "minority". like commiting murder not gettin 'caught'/
your gettin left behind, like you got thalidomide, legs tryin 2 sprint/
and if you ever make it to the pinnacle....... its gon be a short
stint/
you coudnt get your 'message' across, if you was ghost write by royce*/
no internal disse, punches were misses, my style creep up silently like i hav no voice//
i hit you with a blind spit, no feedin, cos its only fair
*"royce da 5'9" (allegedly) ghost-wrote the song "the message" for "dr dre"
nice verse NOW LES GET SOME VOTES!!!.......................................... .................................................. .........................
frozen with heat got this wit punches and flow.Nice Verse!!!!
Otha kid need to elevate
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uppin for votes y'all plz dont sleep on this, how does anyone on this site get a rep, if no 1 votes on their battles
second time uppin.....................................plz vote.............................................. .....................
id say suicidal only because im such a sucker for multis
but good job to the both of ya
keep spittn
peace
p.s. 1 of u challenge me to a battle
~Yer 6 Feet Undah n Feeln Trapped , Cuz I Know How U Think Like A Phone Thats Tapped , Im Strapped Yer Tryin Tah Figure Out Why I Snapped , But Wit All This Backtalk Fer Sho Ull Get Clapped , My Knuckles Are Wrapped , Cry While U Die Thinkin This Shitz Whack , When Ur Gettin Attacked Yer Heart Stopz Twice Im Not Nice Thats A Fact , Ill Have Yer Skull Cracked Yer Back Snapped N Wrapped Like A Mummy Ill End Yer Career Yer A Fuckn Crash Test Dummy , Yer Thinkin Itz Dark Outside Man Lifez Juss Not Sunny~
yo check it
opener:frozen
closer:frozen
wordplay:frozen
structure:tie
multis:suicidal
punches:frozen
personals:none
overall:frozen
good battle from both you newb's jus keep doin wat ya doin an keep elevatin,
best lines:
frozen:
im ready to expose this cat to y'all... like he a wack 'presentation'/
this dude be hungry for a battle win but gettin beat by starvation/
~the second line was hot~
suicidal:
this nigga aint no vet he aint wise enuf ta rhyme wit me//thas why he finna have me spittin first ta combine his style ta me--but still get ate up violently//
~probs ur best line~
Vote disqualified... from now on, if ANYONE is suspected of using an alias to vote for themselves, it will be an instant ban. Doesn't matter if you are two different people or not.
~Kalvin
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C'MON YAW SHOW SOME LUV AND VOTE YAW!!!............................................ .................................................. ..............................
ima say frozen takes this....heres my breakdown......
structure-tie
flow-tie
vocab-frozen
wordplay-suicidle
punches-frozen
personals-tie
overall-frozen
props to the both of ya, but ima say frozen takes this.......yo suicidle check yo pm box homie......
peace......
BuMp^^............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....................
uppin y'aal 4 more votes....................................dont sleep on this y'all......................
WE NEED VOTES YAW QUIT SLEEPIN ON SHIT AND JUS VOTE IT DONT TAKE THAT FUKIN LONG!............................................. .
i actualy felt suicidal more here---he had good multi's couple aight disses---frozen ya had an ok verse--good structure--no hard punches though---vote=suicidal
peep my battles in the sig and vote
they need to be ended! thanx
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