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Thread: we all die one day

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    maxximum
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    we all die one day

    if there was a god what would he look like//
    would he really make this fucked-up world tight?//
    if there wasn't war,if there weren't fights//
    would life really be better,if peeps had no cheddar//(money)
    no more peeps tryin to make more cash than a gay wear's leather//
    no more pain,blood and tears and no more racehate//
    no more fucked-up kids killin their own classmates//
    no more little cute gils gettin beat up and raped//
    but people keep buyin guns and bush keeps droppin bombs//
    I ain't got shit to say, but we all die one day...one day//
    we all die one day...each in another way...one day//
    will we really die younger if we don't pray?//
    the cristians pray to God and the moslims to allah//
    but I don't believe in any god since i was a crawlah//(baby)
    you know why? no? well I'm n ot gonna lie//
    I don't believe cuz one day...we all die!!!

    aight just a quick spit,tellin it like it is...

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    DECENT AND VERY POETIC WORK HARD YOU GOT A GOOD CONCIOUS
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    ^thanx dawg

  4. #4
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    don't sleep on this y'all...

  5. #5
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    yeah that was some good poetic type shit dawg keep postin and i look forward to readin yo shit

  6. #6
    gotaloveforrap
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    ^^straight wordness to all these cats....i was feelin a poetic vibe when i read that, thats not necessarily a bad thing though. ur vocab and wordplay were ok, and next time ima say try a pick a better topic to write about, but its all good, keep droppin homie, u got potential......

    peace......

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    maxximum
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    aight thanx

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    zzzzzzzzzzzzz

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    wtf...y'all sleepin or sumthing?damn

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    I got BANNED but I'm back!(I'm maxximum)
    so...uppin

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    it was good for an open mic... you could elevate a lil...
    Ima get you into the Omens and you can do some collabs
    with the crew and elevate... I'm gonna put a deadline on ya
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    thanx

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