yog dogg vs Drummerman

[gotaloveforrap]

aight fellas, this is where u two will duke it out.....

Rules-
10 lines max
no feeding
no biting
no recycling
no dickriding
no crew votes
yog_dogg spits first

verses due 45 min after check ins

and ill be battlin u drummerman tonight, remember our verses r due at 10 30 ur time, dont forget....

good luck to both of u cats

peace........

[yog_dogg]

oh dawg i am not checkin in but we agreed to have our rhymes due by 10:30 tonight also so yeah on that note peace.

[yog_dogg]

OKAY SCREW THAT WE IS POSTIN CHECKIN IN................................................ .................................................. ............................................

[Drummerman]

i B chekin in
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[Drummerman]

you spit first
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[yog_dogg]

aight check it,

okay i am battlin this fat ass bitch, i will kill him wit a lynch,
why'd he even agree to battle,for my rhymin ability this is just a synch
he aint even a thug, he doesnt know what its like in da hood,
if i could give him a chance i would, but if i did i dont think he could/
match my flows, his is obviously way to week,
why i am battlin you, try skill is what i seek. look at his technique/
there no way u can win have u seen, me rhyme,
why am i messin wit you i have not enough time/
to fuck around like this, once this is done stay out my sight,
except for today cause i'll be wit cho momma tonight/

love...

[Drummerman]

your a little bitch
i gonna fuck you up beyond all recognition
i gona shoot you in the face
drag you around the hall
i gonna chop ur head off then send it to ur ma
fuck you man im a tru thug
me and my boyz r gonna bury you in the park
and when people pass by they know that u got blasted cuz you talked to much shit...
Peace

[Drummerman]

you know what fuck this im done.....
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[yog_dogg]

okay we need votes now.. Uppin in herr.............................................. ........................................

[Otherwordz]

ok...

structure-yog
flow-yog
multi'z-neither
punchez-hmmm...I'd say yog
personalz-neither
overall-yog_dog

Drummerman...I don't know what the fuck that was but I ain't seen one rhymin' word in the whole verse...

[yog_dogg]

^fo real king.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..

[Q.S]

this is the most pathetic piesa shit i ever read in my whole 16 years of existance........

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LadyD

[gotaloveforrap]

^^^yea drummerman u suck balls, anywho ima say yog_dogg takes this, heres me breakdown.....

structure-yog
flow-yog
vocab-yog
wordplay-yog
punches-yog
personals-tie
overall-yog

props to yog_dogg, drummerman u just suck, my vote goes to yog_dogg

peace......

[CYN]

aiight both flows were kinda weak but tis one os to dogg. he had beeter consistency and a way better ending. so yea .................................................. ...............doggg got this one .............................................eithe r of u can battle me when u want halla back...............................

[CYN]

o yaeh and drummerman learn to ryme ur shit damn.............................................. .................................................. .................................


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