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Thread: ...::Motivation::...

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    Pot 'Ed pot1ent's Avatar
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    ...::Motivation::...

    Why is it all famous artists were just an ignoramus carcass
    Lack of motivation leaves complications impacted on creed


    Devestation is motivation to acheive your objectives
    Laziness leads to death and your elective recedes
    Greed is rejected and relieve whats expected of you
    I burn sites so you all are left with infected views
    Looking at two things cuz i was given two eyeballs
    To look and conquer at anything that seen to bawl
    I brawl in lost fights, Crawl cuz it stopped my height
    Install pot to what you write so got complete fright
    Speak flights like Im an airport schedule announcer
    Motivation equals you've caught exceptional power
    Only thing regrettable is aims are scoured to badly
    And sadly most people stop and reminisce so glady
    Now effort is casually done and actually is not there
    No prevention of attention cuz peeps stop and stare
    When Declared motivation..


    You have insisted to persist in having momentum assist
    You...Have the power now to make exemption of risks
    Pot` Ed.

    I dropped to show RM what hot was;
    And this faggot got Butterflies in his stomach the size of Mothra

    Your text is just another weak display
    One fist to your eye'll make it go through that black album remix phase. - Saviour Arraign

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    gotaloveforrap
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    damn dawg that was a pretty ill drop, the vocab and wordplay were great, the content and topic were both original, and the rhyme scheme was good, keep at it holmes that was tight.

    peace.....

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    Yeah i agree..this was a good drop..i liked the way you opened it up and the way you finished it...your vocab was great i thought...the concept was pretty good...and i liked the content..all your lines seemed to flow well together as i read it...overall it was a good drop, keep dropping.

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    1 Werd^^ Dope

    Original , complex, ...flow was there well structured , ....

    Only thing regrettable is aims are scoured to badly
    And sadly most people stop and reminisce so glady
    Now effort is casually done and actually is not there
    No prevention of attention cuz peeps stop and stare
    When Declared motivation..

    Damn ^nice nice nice

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    damn nice drop kid... your flow was on, and you vocab is
    damn nice... I like the way you brought this piece in... you
    had a reall nice opening playa... keep droppin...
    check my drop dawg... its called "COMPLEXITY"
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    Geme a D.....Geme a O...Geme a P...Geme E...WHAT DOES IT SPELL


    DOPEEEEEEE

    good job kid...u elevated alotttt...nice vocab..flow..consept..opener n finisher
    goo drop/....holla....

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    Thanx
    Pot` Ed.

    I dropped to show RM what hot was;
    And this faggot got Butterflies in his stomach the size of Mothra

    Your text is just another weak display
    One fist to your eye'll make it go through that black album remix phase. - Saviour Arraign

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    niiiice... some of your better shit 4 sure... mad vocab, some ok wordplay... the flow was good, different style from me, but i could tell it was there, you got an' angry sounding voice i think, if not, it would work better 4 this... i liked it... short as you said, but good... 1
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    KingOfKings
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    good drop dunny, not bad of a drop

    keep these stuffs rollin in


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