CarsonJet -v- Liba Dee

[CarsonJet-2k4]

rules:
30 minutes max...afta chek in...
I spit First
No Hate
No Dik
No Feeding
No Recycling
No Biting
No Crew
Good Luck

[CarsonJet-2k4]

checked in...I got 30 now.....hurry up chek in...
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[CarsonJet-2k4]

Liba Dee
5 barz...

ok, here we go.........

YO...look at Liba Dee..She still got baby teeth....
Drink Your Self Sober....Ya b/f said ta fead his meat-
30 days early but i'm still treating dis trick a loss'
Gettin Beaned wit Bag's so much u'd think she's made by Ross-
Sik wit lines?Only if u distribute dope wit monkey blood-
Call it dirty'But R.Kelley lookin for u'He wants ta Dik in Mud-
Who u think u are claimin u from the town of Brokka-
forget it Bitch...Some one help dis Hoe...shes Loca....

now heres tha' closa.......
I spit wounds into this Wom's fetal womb-
Fuk a kat....i sweep dis mouse witta dustin broom-

[FanTa ZeE]

Aiyo...So i see your screenname is CarsonJet, well this plane bouta blast off the internet/
Coz his shits so whack not even biggie sitting on it could keep it down/
You provide entertainment for kiddies on their birthdays, your the clown/
I see your shit and i frown, it drives me 2 depression/
You been on RB as long as i have, yet still no progression/
I gotta make a confession, Jets messin in the wrong game he has to streak on a football pitch for his claim to fame/
His fucked his mother, sucked off his brother and he wonders why this incest didnt stay under cover/
30 minutes you got to alter past rhymes and post them/
You gotta book full of stolen shit, so your always on time/
You shag men, wanna boyfriend? have mine/
This battle was wrapped up when i punched in the first line/
8 - 3 and you battling lightweights like me, just for a chance of a win, well w'ell see/
The votes in, you pay them to back you, how much that costing?/
Take your failure ass back over to Boston/

[CarsonJet-2k4]

alright..........lolz........sorry................ ...............
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uppin for votes............................................. ....

[FanTa ZeE]

Eh Heh!!!!!!
Yo Jet peepz needin votes in here!!!! woohoo no hate/crew votes.

RESPECT THE LIQUOR

[Born To Kill]

Pretty one sided here in my opinion.

Liba came with the bulk, no doubt.
More bullets mean more hits, right?

Hmmm...

No.

Liba's format and rhyme scheme were just disasterous.
Sorry, don't wanna beef, but you need to discover flow.

And wordplay. Didn't see a stitch of it in the verse.

You took multi's, no doubt.
And effort, if that was a catagory.

But shorten ya lines...(did I actually just say that?)

Punches: Carson
Flow: Carson
Wordplay: Carson
Complexity: Carson
Multi's: Liba

There ya go.

[FanTa ZeE]

uppin 4 votes................. pleez people dont vote just becoz the person above has said stuff for you 2 hit on, honesty is the best policy.

RESPECT (god, i sound like a teacher)

[C_Drama]

Ight, here's how I see it

Wrote too much for not even hitting alot

Carson, y'betta tell me u trying not to waste good punches and ur not using yer skills cuz if dats ur real skills and u have 8 wins............no comment

neways, no offense to both, but this battle was weak
Carson to me only had 1 line that had a somewhat good diss
Liba had 2 near to her opener, rest was blaahhhhh,

i never judge on quantity, only quality

Flow = Carson (liba's lines were way too lengthy)
Punches = Both
Multis = none (Liba aint got enuff)
Metas = Liba
Wordplay = None
Creativity = Liba
Structure = Carson
Enjoyability = Liba

(Tho here shit was longer and wuteva, it aint like that, I enjoyed her verse more cuz it looks she's putting more effort into it like she wants to win, like tryna be a bit creative)

but Liba, cut ur damn lines yo........no hatin but bringing that to audio aint gon work....

Vote = Liba

[C_Drama]

excuse me fo da freepost but i forgot to drop ma link to ma battles

hit dese up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82689

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82689

[FanTa ZeE]

C Drama i'll check it. Uppin for votes peepz..................................

oh yeah and next time i will make the lines shorter, thanx for the advice

RESPECT

[El Chapo]

yo this battle was nice but here's my feedback
Carson i seen him do battle way better i guess it wasn't his day today the verse he dropped was like newbie and i didn't really feel it it was like a normal verse with not many hot punches
While Liba i liked the style she brought to this battle nice line about biggie too yo that shit was hot ma you had the punchlines but carson had the overall verse but my vote goes to
Vote=LD


vote for my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82700

[FanTa ZeE]

uppin for votes peepz .................................................. ...........

RESPECT 2 Y'ALL

[FanTa ZeE]

votes needed............................................ .................................

pleez reply

RESPECT Y'ALL

[FanTa ZeE]

UPPIN..........................need votes in.................................pleez vote honestly, no crew/ hate on either side.

Thanx and Respect