10 lines minimum.
12 lines maximum.
No crew votes from DM & 10th Degree..
Cheak in..
Northern Touch.
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10 lines minimum.
12 lines maximum.
No crew votes from DM & 10th Degree..
Cheak in..
alright the rules were 1bar or 1line min 14 bar or 25 line max...
Cheking in thanks for fixing the thread I forgot to post a poll....
We are going by my rules; I set it back up..
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Look just cause you set it up dont mean you are changing the rules the rules are how I said or No battle plus if you dont 100 posts dont post anything or you will ba banned for freeposting... if you post that you will vote after we hit your battle we will ban you for freeposting...
Give a good explenation, poll vote, and the drop your link that simple
Would y'all please hit this up it's getting slept on?:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82475
JUS-10 your message has been sent to alldig and you will be banned or warned for free posting...
Orbiit are we doing this or what check in saying you agree to my rules...
Im going 12 lines..
Dont be a fag; just match me.
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Rejections hard; so ill let you down easy; so you cope with my bars;
Touch is weak; the only shine you will ever have lies in the north star!
Setting our battle wrong?!; that wont save your record for that long;
Like teaching this kid manners; winning is right; but battling me was wrong!
I'll be the one to claim your first loss; open firing on that clean OoOh;
& I didn't think any good finisher involve the word 'Cause' 4 times in a Row !
Much elevation is needed for you; expecially when you own sig says ouch;
I would give you some good tips about self esteem; but wins you already doubt!
The new kid took your spot; I would feel like shit & join a whack crew 2;
Only think whacker then touch; is his reflection & still thats laughin at you!
You wont capture a win; adapt to your dim; it just wasnt ment to be;
Knock 1 down from the ten; heats less intence; so ill call you nine degree's!
Quick Explination - The ouch line; is about the moving part of his sig with his name; the first part to come out of the center is touch but looks like Ouch.
First off Bars and star dont rhyme but that beside the point..
Great verse I have to admit... I see this is going to be a close battle...lol
Intro
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Orbiit your spitting to quick, making your self lyrically sick/
Hard to hear you with your mouth filled with Bizzurk's dick//(Diamond Mindz Leader)
Cumming quick not letting you speak, unelevated lyrics starting to leak/
You scared to play like if we was playing hide and go seek// (Like 4 Battle Calls with no answer)
Warming Up
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Diamond Mindz is stuck in your head, unfortunately you left me to fill it with lead./
Inflating like a baloon with Artiq in your head, 2 bad U accepted this battle and your already dead//
Finishing Touches
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& Kid I actually liked you, unfortunately after this win I'm coming for your crew/
Letting my acidic verbal melt you into my lyrical stew//
Dont take your first lost personel cause its business/
Look out as this last punch goes through your vest with a blessing... God Bless//
Aight man tight battle I matched your lines...
Cool Respect to both battlers
This is how I bbbbreeeak it down
Orbiit
1bar - North was right bars and star dont rhyme 5/10
2bar - I like how you used his battle score in your verse what I didn't like was that you used wrong twice in the same bar... 6/10
3bar - Good line of the beggining of the bar but I check the link and I still don't get it so I give ya 6/10
4bar - This bar had so much potential but youjust didn't make sense maybe if you rearranged the words it could have been a kill 5/10
5bar - Crazy bar had to give you 8/10
6bar - what a FINISHER 9/10
Overall = 39/60 = 65%
Great Battle orbiit only tip try to make sense, rearrange wording and structure your verses.
Northern Touch
1bar - You came out really hard striking the head by directing the punch to both orbiit and Bizzurk bold move 8/10
2bar - I like how you continues with how bizurk dick was in his mouth and how cummin quick and leaks all made sense and then showing orbiit as like if he was scared cause he didn't answer your bitch slap calls or even inside his crew callout ... 8/10
3bar - I liked how first you take the head out Bizzurk and then go for the neck artick 7/10
4bar - You must be in a kamikaze mission going for their whole crew so I am going to have to say good luck with that 6/10
5bar - WOW this put a smile on my face... cause your last line was so original and creative, cause ussually you wanna dismiss your opponent instead you gave him a blessing 10/10
overall = 39/50 = 78%
Tips you should elevate your shit and I think you should join a better crew...
Overall Vote going to Northern Touch. Good Job though Orbiit and if you say that north should have been out of 60 it would have been a tie then I would still vote for north cause he scored exactly like you with less material... Remember its quality not quantity...
I was Banned becaues I got caught voting for myself
Thanks for your vote and very well explained uppin this battle first time 1-0 for me... vote vote vote vote
this battle was iight, but I have to go wit Orbit....stronger disses, hit more solid
North's disses were just so so, Orbit shit wasnt a killer but it came harder
Vote = Orbit
hit these battles up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82689
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82689
not explained. feeble.
Last edited by Feeble Minded.; October 4th, 2003 at 08:23 AM
Alright this is my 2nd time upping this battle it should be stil 1-0 cause only well explained votes will count... and a mod will delete C-Dramma post and vote I am not sure though if they are going to ban him they should leave him witha a warning...
VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE
how more detailed u want me to be???
theres nothing else to judge on this battle
cuz it lacked, wordplays, personals, metas and all that
so i have to only judge on disses
and if its disses alone, there's not much to say about it dunny, think about it.........
3rd time uppin this battle dont let it get slept on man.... Aight VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE
Well Explained votes like "joshuadaniellain"
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