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Thread: 4 Mins 38 Secs---- KeyStyle

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    4 Mins 38 Secs---- KeyStyle

    Out Write Productions...

    One More Time....

    KeyStyle

    Uhhhhhhhhh,.....


    Lookin At My Self, Am I That Guy In The Mirror?
    Holdin Back Emotions Only Showin In My Interior
    I Worry About Little Petty Stuff Thats Inferior
    Tryna Speed Up Judgment By The Surperior
    Depressed Cuz Nuthin Matters And All My Dreams Shatter
    Right Before My Eyes Like They Were Served on A Platter
    Negative Thoughts Lead To Irrational Actions
    And Everything Sux, So Shit Nucca, Whats Happnin
    My Minds Had Problems Since My Beggining
    Like A Tree, They Start At A Seed And Start Stemming
    Pad And Pen To Vent And Repent On Bad Judgment
    But Venting And Repenting Dopley Is Gods Compliments....

    Just A Short Sumin Sumin...

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    tRiPliCiTy
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    it has come to my attention
    "Mirror?
    Holdin Back Emotions Only Showin In My Interior" unless u say
    mirror and inti-rar, or miri-ar and interior

    fuckin wackness, elivate homo rhymer, that made no sense
    and went no where please stop with your keystles, spit about
    an acutal topic next time, u had no flow, no orgianl style,
    no originaly actually ur the original herb of the day, baHHHH
    ur pissin me off get to detention, fuckin hell bah PLEASE READ
    MY TEXT NEXT TIEM SPIT ON A FUCKIN TOPIC NOT JUST URSELF
    GET IT GOT IT NOW FUCKIN DO IT????!?!?!?!?!???!?!?


    GOT SKILLZ???? I DONT THINK SO FUCKIN HOMO

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81857
    Last edited by tRiPliCiTy; September 26th, 2003 at 10:57 AM

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    ^^^ dunno where this fucker learned to talk but mirror and interior do rhyme.... still this piece lacked a topic its flow was rather weak, still rhymes where half ways decent, elevate dunnie elevate
    **-----**You think I'm down-n-out, you think I just gonna give in, let myself be defeated... will it ain't gonna happen... cuz I ain't ever finished, nope never gone give in, I'm never finished**-----**

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    ^^ LoL You Just Called Me Dunnie, I Was Well Blunted..I Dont Care About It.. Its A Drop I Did Cuz I Gottta Have My Name In The Forum

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    Fuck What That Guy Said I Thought This Was A Pretty Decent Drop For A Keystyle You Keyed Up A Walk Into Your Mind And That Was Pretty Good I Liked It..


    holla back..
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    Yeah this peice was good, it was a pretty good read i thought too, your flow was ok, pretty good content you had, and it was a alright concept, overall id say it was a pretty good drop, keep dropping and if you get the chance check out my peice called first day of school, much appreciated, thanks.

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    tRiPliCiTy
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    Mirror?
    Holdin Back Emotions Only Showin In My Interior" unless u say
    mirror and inti-rar, or miri-ar and interior

    mirror and interior doesnt rhyme cock jockey

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    Whos Accent Are You Using?

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    *Y_nOt*
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    this was an aiight drop. Your flow and content was straiight but like everyone else said GET A TOPIC NEXT TIME!!! But its all good this was a keystyle anyways so w/e w/e......keep elivate'n, 1

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