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Thread: Looking Back

  1. September 24th, 2003, 12:42 PM #1
    'PercepTion'
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    Looking Back

    Think rap for the verses, and r n' b beat and for the bridge and hook.

    [Bridge]
    There’s No Comparison,
    There’s No Competition...
    Just Relaxation n’ Security...
    With Added Love And Purity...

    [yo,]
    How Can We Ever be At The End Of The Line...
    How Can It Be Even Close To Our ‘Time’...
    Not Even A Distinction Or A Blurry Sign...
    Your Mine, Is Me Loving You Such A Crime...
    We Went To Hell And Back, Then Back Again...
    I Was Neither Distrustful Nor Addicted To Cocaine...
    Through The Rain, Now I Can Understand Our Pain...
    But Times Running Out, My Emotions Beginning To Drain...
    I Just Wanna Be Yours, Go Back n’ Forth From Emotional Wars...
    Open New Doors, Buy Gifts For His n’ Hers...
    Is It Insane, Wrong, Is This Where I Belong?...

    [Bridge]
    There’s No Comparison,
    There’s No Competition...
    Just Relaxation n’ Security...
    With Added Love And Purity...

    [Hook]x2
    There’s No One That Can Compare...
    I’ll Rush Home Just To See You There...
    You’re the Amen, In My Prayer...
    Not A Year, Without A Joyless Tear...
    We’re Just Two People In The Right Gear...

    In 30 Years, When We’ve Both Drifted Fully Apart...
    Will You Still Remember Me In Your Loving Heart...
    Will You Still Reminisce The Day, We Had To Depart...
    We Were As Sharp As A Dart, But Now Your Gone...
    I Knew Somewhere That Our Love Wouldn’t Last Long....
    But I’ve Gotta Keep Strong. Knowing I Done Nothing Wrong...
    But I Keep Your Memories, Along, In My Broken Spirit...
    Never Once Questioned Our Relationship, I Just Rolled With It...
    You And Me, In Memory Together Forever...
    Thought We Were Just To Expressively Clever...
    2 Years Ahead, Us Breaking Up, NEVER!...

    [Bridge]
    There’s No Comparison,
    There’s No Competition...
    Just Relaxation n’ Security...
    With Added Love And Purity...

    [Hook]x2
    There’s No One That Can Compare...
    I’ll Rush Home Just To See You There...
    You’re the Amen, In My Prayer...
    Not A Year, Without A Joyless Tear...
    We’re Just Two People In The Right Gear...

    I Never Freaked Out, Got Into Guns n' Thugs...
    Only Ever High On Your Special 'Drugs'...
    You Were Always There For Me, I Was For You...
    But Who Knew, That The Prophcies Were True...
    We Would Split Up, Before Our Relationship Reached Year 2....
    But I Still Stuck With It, I Just Rolled With It...
    I Thought We Would've Made It, But Evidently Not...
    In Vain Now, Were All The Pointless Battles We Fought....
    If I've Learned Anything, It's Taught Me How To Act...
    Never Live By Rumour, Always Live By The Fact....
    Maybe I Did Over-React, But You Still Got Your Teeth Intact...
    I Could've Cracked, Attacked And Hit With Devastating Impact...
    But I Didn't, I Would'nt, Your Know I Couldn't... (BITCH)

    [Bridge]
    There’s No Comparison,
    There’s No Competition...
    Just Relaxation n’ Security...
    With Added Love And Purity...

    [Hook]x4
    There’s No One That Can Compare...
    I’ll Rush Home Just To See You There...
    You’re the Amen, In My Prayer...
    Not A Year, Without A Joyless Tear...
    We’re Just Two People In The Right Gear...

    You know..ha..ha...[gunshot]
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  2. September 24th, 2003, 04:19 PM #2
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    uppin', lotta sleeping in Open Mic these days..
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  3. September 25th, 2003, 12:16 PM #3
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    uppin' this shit!
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  4. September 25th, 2003, 12:41 PM #4
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    open mics are getting long now!!!

    the flow on this was pretty good but i think it needed a little fixing
    the topic was a good appraoch on a usually played topic
    mulitis lacked but vocab made up for it

    If I've Learned Anything, It's Taught Me How To Act...
    Never Live By Rumour, Always Live By The Fact....

    ^^how true is that, my fav line

    if you would be so kind (sorry but all 3 fell asleep...)
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81665
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81616
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81183

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  5. September 26th, 2003, 12:50 PM #5
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    FFS, the amount of sleepin' that goes on in OM now is ridiculous, not just this piece, but Fgee's had to up his about 6 times before another reply, same with Word~Perfect!

    Get a hold of yourself Rb!
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  6. September 26th, 2003, 01:21 PM #6
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    This was a good peice, it was a good read too i thought, your flow was good, your multies were ok maybe use a little more, you vocab was good though, overall id say it was good.
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  7. September 27th, 2003, 08:03 PM #7
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    Read the my other uppin's......

    Uppin' .. lol
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