20 lines
i spit first
same ol voting rules....
Prophecy_06
Mynd Melt
20 lines
i spit first
same ol voting rules....
My lungs like hurricains.........i culd smoke all da worlds killa!!!!!!!!
blunt blazed fo life!!
I got salyva like liter fluid that will make ya "Mynd Melt"/
Send u packin like deport police wuz on my belt/
Fuckin bitch, battle'n me iz a no-no/
You aint even aight, you so-so, couldnt "see me" if I sent you a photo/
I could drop 2 bars & be done/
Because your spits is reused like everyone elses, feel like Im watchin re-runs/
Its apparent shit, but you probably aint aware of it/
My rhymes birthed you, if I died youd be parentless, I could spit this in ancient Arabic/
Or tha original Latin language/
Im flagrant, like steele Smith & Wessons, my record is "stainless"/
I spit divine divinity, rhyme infinity/
My lines define centuries, remember me & make friends with me or your end can be as my enemy/
You useless, last-supper ruthless Judas/
Ima confuse this music student like he was a cubic rubix/
It aint tha battle its tha principle/
Deadlys bars you cant stop me, bite all you want, Im still invincible/
Like diplomats in foreign countries, to your rhymes I got immunity/
Fuck you, tha & those soon ta be, we can go you & me or you can be murdered by Divided Unity/
Ill bust & rush & not givafuck, tha truth has been spoken/
Cut prophecy from his guts-ta-his-nuts thrust through his mind crushed, & really leave him wide-open
my first battle wuznt shit im ready to come like this all da time.......
My lungs like hurricains.........i culd smoke all da worlds killa!!!!!!!!
blunt blazed fo life!!
nigga, my lines are ~sick~ and they'll ~throw up on ya~
bitch, you couldn't be ~hard~ wit ~bitches on ya dick~
ya putcha ~punches in quotations~ all they are is ~talk~
~rip~ ya like ~cardboard~ and ~leave ya on da walk~ like
~curbside recyclin~//5 lines
nigga, u could be ~stabbin wit knives~ and still couldn't
~kill mics~. attack me i'll ~reverse em~ and ~drive me
through ya~ like bein ~impaled by spikes.~ ya life expectancy must have ~legs~ the way its ~runnin out.~ every ~punch~ lines ~hit harder~ than an ~ali bout~//5 lines
i ~cutcha feet off~ and ~shoved em down ya throat~
so you can experience the ~taste of de-feet.~i couldn't
be ~beat~ if i told ya bitch i was ~good wit my hands~
and she hooked me up wit ~hand-job.~//4 lines
i cause so much ~mental trauma~ i make ya ~mynd melt.~
ya ~punches~ are comin from da ~invisible man~ they ~can't be felt.~ when ya was ~typin ya name~ ya made a ~typo~ and forgot to hit ~delete~. dumbass, you submitted ya verse only ~half complete.~ proph has just shut ya down like ~control alt delete~//6 lines
aight let the votin begin motherfucker!..................................... .................................................. .................................................. ..........
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Aiyo....
MIND MELT- you had a good flow goin and some fuckin ill ass word play... your vocab. was decent and you had a few punches that I really liked... I like your style.
Overall you had a good spit... your last two bars were fuckin ill as hell and I think thats what made your spit good, cause you had a strong finish... I rate this shit at an 8.
prophecy- your structure was way off and your bars ended in some odd places and it threw your flow off... I couldnt quite grasp it until like the middle of your spit, but once I caught on to it, it was pretty tight man... just keep ya structure in check and you'd be doin better... your vocab was decent, and your wordplay was also pretty good... your punches werent hittin too hard and that kinda dropped it for ya too... just keep at it and better ya structure... I rate this at a 5.
vote- mynd melt...
DayumNation
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Mynd had a simple verse...kinda borin cause he did'nt hit with no oooh's or ahhh's... disses were ok..punches were so so..he had no heat..had a touch of creativity..some lines seem forced
prop was iight but some of his bars did'nt rhyme...he had hella played punches...structure was kinda off...disses were ok..both need to step it up a lil.....
vote Mynd....he edge with a slightly betta verse...
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mynd- you had NO good punches at all. they had very little if any role in ya verse. ya structure was off
proph-had a coupla played lines, but overall the lines were tight, and they hit pretty hard.
vote-prophecy
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Originally posted by prophecy_06
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uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dont let dis go to waste!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My lungs like hurricains.........i culd smoke all da worlds killa!!!!!!!!
blunt blazed fo life!!
Originally posted by Mynd Melt
uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dont let dis go to waste!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My lungs like hurricains.........i culd smoke all da worlds killa!!!!!!!!
blunt blazed fo life!!
Agreed.Mynd Was Too Weak.Proph Had A Stronger Verse Wit A Bit Of Complexity TooOriginally posted by deser_eagle
mynd- you had NO good punches at all. they had very little if any role in ya verse. ya structure was off
proph-had a coupla played lines, but overall the lines were tight, and they hit pretty hard.
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