4Fifth (I.J.L.) vs. Kautious (D.D.)

[SmokaJoka]

10 lines max...
due date is 24 hours after BOTH emcees check in....therefore it doesn't matter who spits first as long as both emcees make deadline
no crew/hate/bias/dickryde votes
no recycling
no biting

peace
4:20

[4Fifth]

^^uppin so warning, surgeon general or whateva da fuck can see tha thread..


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[Chemarim]

Dealing wit I.J.L is just a practice killing…shit…’chilling’ how they spit wit ‘no heat’/
Like deep oceans 4fifth gets a ‘drilling’...beat … u get ‘screwed’ out of a win with defeat/

Spit to Rock the body and ‘Kill the beat’ the way my ‘words attack harts’/
Verbal skills bring final ‘judgment’ the way I splash away this mans ‘smarts’/
(Blow yea mind)

This bitch is flyweight, elevate n step to my state before ...wait… to late like orikle it’s check-‘mate’/
Even if 4fith builds up and spits hate, im to ‘good’ for his traits n even if you bit Brooklyn u still wouldn’t be over-rated great/

Should call this guy Mr. Greek the way he be tossing salads and got fags in his crew/
A flat bush nigga, maybe that’s why his game never grew, talking big ova the net, maybe something else never did 2/

24 n can’t script so I’ll scorch his core, he cornered to get robbed like convenient stores /
get a notha life u can’t rap im 15 and can say im better then u, ya audios suck , the only time they sick is when u spit wit the flu/

[4Fifth]

Kaution:fuck warnin all u get 4 fuckin wit 45th isya corpse stiff which forces ya fam in2 mournin/
in forums ur limp while my rips stands out like my dic does every damn morning//
How dare yo young no talent havin square fag cunt ass.../
..step 2a grown man when ur 15yr old ass hasent even grown hair on ya nutsack?//
It amuses me how u believe dat u can fool wit me n aint made it thru puberty,between u n me.. ur not2 young 2 die/
make K's vertebre recline when i snap his weak spine,n punch THRU ya chest jus 2hit u from behind//
Id hurt u but id get locked up 4 ages 4 rearrangin da face ofa gay kid who still has a curfew/
battle?mo like child endangerment found out ur 15,read ya rips n it made me think.. i'll have my lil brotha merc u//
Accordin 2dis shit,Kautious get'n rip'd n is close 2 bein deported like slick rick/
anotha slaughter wit da quickness fuck wit dis?sshit u wont have da balls if u hung unda my big dick//

[Feeble Minded.]

everything cleared. votes werent explained cept one or maybe two. the rest were one line, d/r goin on here.
any more one line votes and ur warned. u only get one warning, dont waste it here if ur a one line vote person.
vote fairly, im watchin this battle.
pz

[rule]

this is a hard choice...both freestylesi felt came good, flow was better in kautious i felt, punches i think were about the same...i think i'd give that to..kautious as well, i felt he had more creativity an harder disses, 4fifth came well, but i think my vote has ta go to kautious i felt it was a nice spit an came good...peace

[Chemarim]

feeble minded:
i agree thewir was some sided votes like jd's vote cuz i voted on his battle but i think he won that battle i voted on honestly so how can you call that dickrideing if he think i won this one?... he explained it but if joka or 45th didn't like it then what eva.

rule: explained? i guesse but do y'all want more?
tonya~montana: Had a explained vote im pretty sure

so in my favor it should be 2-0 or 3-0

[Chemarim]

uppin this

need honest votes please

explained

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[Chemarim]

yo uppin for dis

if this shit don't get votes soon m a drop a audio tah end it so lets get votes on this

need votes !

[Chemarim]

last upping, y'all bitchs gonna participate in this or watch yea selfs lose?

need some votes on this battle..
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[215_Karats]

Yo, I feel as if 45 got it because the ova bol' came way too out on his punchlines. The "Mr. Greek", the ocean bit, really I think 45th was more mature on his shit as well as the last bar being killer. Me, I'm a grimey type nigga who loves the street, but Kautious' verse isn't some shit you'd hear on my block about being hot. So no hate, but 45th gets it based on the maturity level. You know who to holla at.

Now vote on my battle with Ruttah, niggas. It's somewhere out there.

[4Fifth]

^^^Uppin 4 obvious reasons..

yo karats.. thanx 4 voting i'll def return da fav.. send me the link 2 yo battle that goes 4 any1 else who drops a real vote, i'll return the favor n shit.. so if u drop a solid vote.. leave a link 2 the battle of yours that needs 2 get voted on.. aight ya sleepin ass muhfuckaz??..lol

[4Fifth]

^^^^ damn this fucked up voting on this match would make florida voters seem incredibly organized,lol....^^^^

[4Fifth]

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[C_Drama]

I thought 45th killed this shit
funny ass lines

only prob with 4fifth i find is dat he needs to cut down on his lengthy bars, fucks up the flow

basically he got dis tho with harder hitting punches and dey were funny as fuck

I'll give Kautios props for effort on creative, but not enuff oomf was placed

Vote = 4fifth

hit dis battle up with an HONEST VOTE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81559