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    |[Pain of Glares]|

    Everywhere I travel I get glares of venomous hate
    because im different, because im of a different race
    Why am I put 2nd rate, I put my pants on the same way
    living for the moment to be treated equal, that will be the day
    when . . humans no longer glare, they glance and move on
    only to see another person, no ones labeled wrong
    my skin burns in pools of enraged eyes that stare at me
    im a fuck up, I was a crime when I was born aparently . .
    ive been beaten and treated like shit is that freedom to you??
    put on trial for something I didnt do, with no chance to dispute
    cant speak my own point of view, cus those eyes still glare
    those eyes that despise me, that killed everything I cared
    live a life of despair, why does everything have to be like this
    no thoughts of equality, that notion has been dismissed . .
    glares from nazi's 2 jews,and blacks from white simpremists
    im societies menace . . giving the world something to look at
    glares from people looking for away of removal, im a lab rat
    the same eyes stare, havent they seen enough of my torture
    now im afraid to look at myself, so ill paint them a portrait
    feel no need for pity . . ive made the best out of my life
    those glares are what killed me . . there my death strike .....

    Jagged Mic
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    feel no need for pity . . ive made the best out of my life
    those glares are what killed me . . there my death strike .....

    ^ my fav line it was a il lass topic like a storyline
    shit.. keep dat up .. had alot of good thoughts in
    there..

    return the love and drop sum feed please .. its called hype for the heart... thanx

    peace
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    Thank you....

    More feedback please
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    nice shit, why do people hate you anyways?

    Everywhere I travel I get glares of venomous hate
    because im different, because im of a different race
    nice opening

    feel no need for pity . . ive made the best out of my life
    those glares are what killed me . . there my death strike .....
    nice ending lol

    return da favour on my thread

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    Thank you . . .

    More feedback please
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    nice drop dawg
    nice flow and vocab
    keep it up

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    Thanks .....

    Upping this for some feedback
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    TriX
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    dope....

    .... period

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    Thanks ......

    ...... uppin

    Bit your.......

    ........ ssttyyllee
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    Carmen
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    I was definitely feeling that! All of it, your words were strong from start to finish. I liked it. And that last line is raw!

    feel no need for pity..i've made the best out of my life..those glares are what killed me..there my death strike...

    That's the rawest post I've read today.

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    Thanks for the feedback
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    Up.
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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    HOT LIL SUM SUM NO DOUBT TWIN I IKED IT
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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