24 karat & Focus'd

[Focus'd]

20 lines max
no crew votes
explain votes
i will spit first

[Focus'd]

24 Karat showin no signs of wisdom/
Or lines with rhythm, no design ta your system/
Only time you "go ta tha street is ta check your mail/
"hell s Courtship" already failed, you lookin extra pale/
Almost ghostly, was intimidated before you approached me/
Couldnt be "over me" if I was midget, you spit soberly/
I spit lifted, my bars well analyzed/
You sanitized & Im grimey, never satisfied/
Your knowledge proves ta have no evidence/
Because you seem a little bit illiterate, readin your bars requires Excederin/
Your slow expands but still never improves/
Ill induce wounds that consume your tunes, placed in a tomb too soon/
Make you a prisoner of your own mistakes/
You hesitate, I create debates that leave you in checkmate/
I like whut you tryna do, challenge tha big dogs so you can improve your status/
But this dog is a rabid-infested savage, leavin you & your cabbage in caskets/
"24" becomes demolished because my steele bars are rock solid/
Spit-shined & polished, get a note pad & gain some Knowledge....Bitch....

[24 Karat]

my rhymes leave u 'hopped out' like 'bugs bunny' when i 'smoke karats'(carrots)//
i take a 'snapshot' of ur body 'hangin' from a a gold chain so i can 'picture' how u 'wear it'//
Imma take a 'knife' and put it threw your 'neck'//
I'll take a huge 'nail' and 'hamma' it down ur neck... threw the deck//
Yo rhymes are 'fake'..'gay'.. they 'suck'//
U 'accepted' this 'challenge'... now your really outta 'luck'//
You love the drink 'cocktail'...exspecially with the 'cream' (cum)
SHit.. you can 'chug' the most... outta your whole foot ball 'team'!//
You got the balls to 'stay' and 'linger'//
Fuk it... im juss gonna 'break' all ten of those 'fingers'//
Your like an 'ice cube' sittin by 'burnin flames' to me//
You've been 'melted' by 24 karat.... the same ol' 'G'//


"Karat"

[Focus'd]

good shit dowg...................uppin for votes............................................. .................

[24 Karat]

UPpin... vote... uppin.... uppin.......... vote vote vote vote !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!! Uppin.. dont go to sleep on this battle... vote!!

"Karat"

[Focus'd]

.................................................. .vote dont let da battle be wasted.............................uppin.......... ..................

[str8 jacket]

no contest, focus'd won this battle
he had nice wordplay and good flow
was not feelin 24k at all....he needs some work
no hate no beef just my observation

VOTE FOCUS

[24 Karat]

Uppin... Uppinn.. vote vote vote.... Uppin fo mo votes

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"Karat"

[Yung Thugga]

yo karat u did'nt vote so please come back and vote on the battle............................................ ...............................................

[Yung Thugga]

yo yo good battle tought ass choice but let me label it like this
punches-focus
flow-karat
diss-karat
so my vote goes to karat............................................. ........................

[Yung Thugga]

but i forgot that i cant vote until i get to and 100 posts but when i get there i got u son holla back at that thread ...................

[24 Karat]

Uppin this shit... come on vote come on uppin
.................................................. ..........

"Karat"

[str8 jacket]

why would'nt you vote for karat he voted for your sorry ass
you guys are both bitches
FUCK BOTH OF YOU DICK RYDERS

focus clearly served this herb and you voted for carrot

[24 Karat]

i'm not dick rydin dude..... he came and voted fer who he wanted to i didnt say i voted fer u come vote fer me dude.... quit dippin and dappin until u no whats happenin faggot
I dont Cheat


"Karat"

[Focus'd]

fuck all da shit talkin.....there are battles for dat.....i need votes ....................................one