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    freestyle

    i attack with master gats, slit backs, fuck the throat
    i poke with distortions, and provoke sexual acts when i grope
    i wrote a note, explaining my deepest sympithys
    then burned it, and said "fuck extinguising"
    im in the process of relinquishing the throne
    break ya bones with a twist of the tone, flick of the chrome
    rhyme like visuals, cause my words have pixels shown
    contort ya body into a cone, then continue onto burnin ya flesh
    then i progress to tearin ya body till nothins left of ya chest
    i arrest with captions, verbs cause a reaction
    i spit 20 bars, then i release the main lyrical attraction
    my aim is exactin, onto ya forehead
    rhymes consist of more then deadly word lead
    i was bred, in deepest and darkest dungeons
    when i fucked up a verse, the back of my neck got bludgeoned
    i learned how to outshine the sun-an, out glow the globe
    spit a verse at high enough frequencies to blow out ya ear lobes
    there is no hope, you can't content with me
    any cat who thinks he can battle is offending me
    cause i oversee, rap and hip-hop culture
    got it down to a art like a michaelangelo sculpture
    the rhyme volture, feeding of dead mcs and gods
    be prepared to face my prods against significant odds
    ive finished my verse, but i ain't done with this job....

    this was a real freestyle i did over Swollen Members Snake Bite beat, i have it recorded, but only on cassete, so i thought i would just write the lyrics down for yall, i know it doesn't really have a point lol..... what yall think???

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    Pretty Complex Freestyle. Especiall Vocab. I dont really think it was a freestyle...but blah. The thing that made this wack was of course the fact that theres no real point to it. But like you said, it was freestyle so blah.
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    lol it was a freestyle, and ya, it didn't have a point, i just got on the mic and spit, and thats what came out, so, there ya have it

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    can i get some feedback or what lol???

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    well composed complex and hard hitten im interested i seeing more
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    i liked it, wordplay was good and vocab was good, ive only freestyled a few times but never recorded em jus did it fun a few times and i dont think it ever turns out like that, but mine have topics lol, but urs makes up for that with vocab, good job, 1
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    nice vocab, complex shit, good wordplay, metas...no point, but what the hell!!!

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    ^^^word to what everybody said. I basically would say the same. keep freestyling!

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    Yeah Man......Text Freestyling Is Fucken Ill Like Thats The Hot Shit Mayne...That Was Like So So Ghetto I Coulda Sworn It Was Jay-Z Dogg...You Like Hotter Than A Volcano Or Some Shit Dunny...Werd Up To That...
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    Can't Believe This Was A Freestyle

    Overall - This Was A Nice Read

    I Really Enjoyed Your Vocab And Very Detailed Imagery

    contort ya body into a cone

    Hopefully You'll Post More Lyrics In The Near Future

    ~1~

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    lookin for feedback

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    If a free-style why don't you post up tha actual thing that you recorded.....
    As everyone else said pretty complex, i don't fully believe its a free-style, but nice piece.....
    No hate.....
    Keep writing .....

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    yo dis shit was good keep it up

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    i have it recorded on cassette, my turntables are hooked up to my stereo, which doesn't record cd's lol, i would put it on here as audio if i could lol... and yes it is a real fucking freestyle!

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