check in and spit first
SwiF']['
~JacK ThA RippA~
check in and spit first
I'll spit in a few
20 lines max aight or i aint battlin
no feedin
ill spit soon peace out............................................... ...................................
hurry it up and spit man I gotta go to work soon
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Violent like a villan im dishin Severe Concusions/
Ya dome is crushin, Im splittin wigz like Combs and Brushes/
(wigz means fake gangster)
Carefull son cuz ya talent is down the drain whenever the
Toilet Flushes/! (SHIT!)
Choke? not Swift, I love to spit so I'll Bust ya Quick spillin ur guts N shit/
Fuck this bitch, Jacks the biggest assHole, I guess my dick is a Custom Fit/! (think about it)
Meta equiped wit Syringes, intentionally burnin ya set/
Puttin more needles in this cat than a fuckin Emergency Vet!/
Have u learnt yet? These metas r Turnin ya neck/
Im treatin Jack like a ball at a dunk contest, Slammin this bitch all over the net!/ (internet)
Son u surpass the sheep, ur Nursery Rhymes are tattered and weak, puttin me fast asleep/
My foots on the gas of the jeep, chasin ur ass till I crash as I smash this bitch all over the street/
I give you the cold shoulder only cuz my surface is as rough as glaciers/
Going against me, you've dug ya own grave like suicidal undertakers/
I'll curse ya soul, basically eatin ur verse whole/
Jackies screamin for help like n' old lady who jus got her purse stole!/
Hey, It coulda been worse though, and Listen, I wouldnt be callin You Son if ur mom had taken her Birth Control!/
Get real why you think you can beat me wit these neat rhymes, when your simple ass still uses de-feat lines/
I’ll have u beat, please, I peep a played punch in each line, i'll use ur head to skate n’ then make ya fuckin teeth grind/ !
U can feel the tension but still cant even cut it/
Who the fuck cares about U, we all know ur fuckin sKills are Low Budget...............
uppin..............
Violent like a villan im dishin Severe Concusions/
Ya dome is crushin, Im splittin wigz like Combs and Brushes/
(wigz means fake gangster)
Carefull son cuz ya talent is down the drain whenever the
Toilet Flushes/! (SHIT!)
Yur bars guna be played, plus you portray a gay image like homosexual painters/
Witness ur death,this queer ain't gay, dawg you must contradict yourself like fat fitness trainers/
Choke? not Swift, I love to spit so I'll Bust ya Quick spillin ur guts N shit/
Fuck this bitch, Jacks the biggest assHole, I guess my dick is a Custom Fit/! (think about it)
Meta equiped wit Syringes, intentionally burnin ya set/
Puttin more needles in this cat than a fuckin Emergency Vet!/
Have u learnt yet? These metas r Turnin ya neck/
Im treatin Jack like a ball at a dunk contest, Slammin this bitch all over the net!/ (internet)
Son u surpass the sheep, ur Nursery Rhymes are tattered and weak, puttin me fast asleep/
My foots on the gas of the jeep, chasin ur ass till I crash as I smash this bitch all over the street/
I give you the cold shoulder only cuz my surface is as rough as glaciers/
Going against me, you've dug ya own grave like suicidal undertakers/
I'll curse ya soul, basically eatin ur verse whole/
Jackies screamin for help like n' old lady who jus got her purse stole!/
Hey, It coulda been worse though, and Listen, I wouldnt be callin You Son if ur mom had taken her Birth Control!/
Get real why you think you can beat me wit these neat rhymes, when your simple ass still uses de-feat lines/
I’ll have u beat, please, I peep a played punch in each line, i'll use ur head to skate n’ then make ya fuckin teeth grind/ !
U can feel the tension but still cant even cut it/
Who the fuck cares about U, we all know ur fuckin sKills are Low Budget...............
uppin..............
I mighta went over 20 lines, but just match wut ever extra i put by accident.......................................... .................................................. ................
whyd you at two lines?
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would somebody vote on the d-mecca and rappad battle and ill vote on your guys's battle aight niggas holla front1
ill give my opinion when jack goes....could you please hit this battle up..............
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=69994
Why did I waht two lines?
add 2 lines?
Cus man when I write in this box im writin in right now everythin comes out different wen I post, so i can never be sure its fucked.
Anyway did u like the verse?
can ya'll peep this wit honest votes, thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...590#post669590
You think your lyrically swift? more like lyrically dicked, your lines are played on more then pamela anderson's tits, take a swig an sit maybe when your drunk you'll rap better den dat shit, even if I gave you a "present" of rhymes, you still wouldn't have the ~"gift"~
I'll have you arreasted for exotortion, your just an accident your mom should have had an abortion, you knew when you started my retorting would be more of a bitch then you fucken judge judy on her court thing, just listen to a tape of your self to hear how I ripped you gorey, your mission's impossible, so you better ~abort~
Drowning you in hydrochloric acid, your raps a rancid like bean's coming out your ass kid in the form of gas and shit, I've been blown on more then a maste of a ship in the old age, for you to get your jollies off you gotta masturbate and masticate, your own dick you rape, maybe thats why when I kicked you you didn't feel it, you got balls the size of ~grapes!~
You don't even live near the hood and you think your a thug who raps and spits real good, news flash your 83, and white and swiftly sayin you should have would have and could have, save it bitch, rhymes are more bouncy then a trip on a river raft, stepin in this battle wasa huge trap winning a gains't me is more risky then winning at ~craps~
This battle was a waste of time, your not even up to "par" with any of my lines, your a filty peice of grime, rhymin shit and actin like your shy, can't even get a girl if she was a fat swine, even the blind can see through you like you were in old fogey, your just sittin their and got no homies, in this rap you got a double ~bogey~
I think I really should maudlin though, I got something to tell you before you go, your rhymes are weaker then a nursery rhyme so, row row row your boat gentaly down the stream, meet my ship, you've just been dropped like a break, your life was is now just a ~dream~
change 83 to 11 I don't know why I said 83 :\
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WOW this was a tiggghtt battle....too close to call
Swifty that was pretty nice considering the number of voted u have too.....good luck to both of ya.........
ugh in the last line its brick not break :\
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thats aight
ok Im uppin votes ppl............................................... ..........................pretty nice spit jack............UPPIN............
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