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i fucked up the first set up, but whatever
drop here, you wanna spit first?
Krem
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10 - 20 lines max
20 d/r vots
no crew votes
no hater votes
first to 5 wins
i fucked up the first set up, but whatever
drop here, you wanna spit first?
aight yo check it...
Your name is backwards just like your battle record/
Maybe that's why you're gettin "merk"ed so keep doin ya thing an' shake-ya-tail-feather/
Look at your avartar man, or are you too blind to see/
Your bitch is 2 years old...to young for you or for me/
It thats your bitch's teddy in your hand or are u just tryin to get head b?/
Yo chek it this dude from the maritimes/
I will rip him apart like he is Time!/ (time magazine)
And his reputation will be on an incline/ '-.
I cant believe he asked me to spit 1st when he has 249 posts on this site/
Its 'cause ya scared mothafucka now where's ya' night-light??/
I also cant believe why he wanted to challenge/
Cuz i dissed him in cypher he shaking like a rusty door hinge/
aight spit
ayo, i'm a dawg and i'm bout to eat this cat/
bitch you can't run, you to damn whack//
i'm gonna cut of your legs and de-feet you//
you can't win this battle, you know i'm gonna beat you//
i'm a leave you poor cause you make no cents//
your gonna be hurtin sore, cause this battle's intense//
when you battle me you get burned cause i'm acidity//
your whack at rappin, and you should give up if ur askin me//
bitch you can't get a girl cause they give you cock block//
so you gotta stick with your hand and a plain white sock//
you rhymes are like a baby talking or crying//
you don't understand them...but ya keep on trying//
change your name to i blow and can't get a date//
stop goin for girls dawg, you gay you ain't straight//
meh
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up this this ......
let the best man win this battle.......
uppin 4 some votes.....
peace out......
T4L
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seemed like a pre-write but whatever....uppin for votes............................................. ....
My vote=Krem better flow and punchlines but close battle good spit tho create
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ok thx i still think it was pre-written cuz not 1 punch was directed at me...anyways still uppin for votes.....peace
create got this siht won, his punches were hit dead on and the flow needs work but ti was really good.
vote-create
i can't poll as you can see so just drop what you think here, don't have to poll:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=69549
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uppin 3rd time.....letz get a fuckin vote in here.......................................peace.. ........................
uppin 4th time.....NEED VOTES.............if u vote on r's krem will vote on urs if u drop a link....aight thx....peace
come on here people this is my last uppin
we need some votes up in ths motha fucka
peace
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Easy merk by Krem...
Better wordplay, more effective punches.
Flow was there...
The other cat is definately just getting started.
Try and make every line a punch.
Ya setting up punches with the fist line of a bar then hitting with the second line is cool.
Reads nice.
But when ya opponent hits ya with every line that's he's pretty much doubled ya punch output.
I oughta know...
I loved setting up punches back in the day but I eventually learned to stop that and hit with every line.
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