fiori v/ BROOKLYN

[BROOKLYN]

fiori vs BROOKLYN

Requirements:
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10 Lines Maximum!!!
I'll drop within 2 hours after you, it depends on how long you take.

Rules:
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No Bitin
No Feedin
No Editing
No Bitching
No Building
No Countering
No Hate Votes
No Crew Votes
No Freeposting
No Vote Swaying
No Newbie Bullshit
No Default Vet Votes
* .:!3 Wins Or More To Vote!:. *

Other:
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5 Consecutive Votes Is A K.O.
5 Total Votes Is A Defeat

Comments:
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1 ST. TO ACCEPT, I'LL SET IT UP & YOU SPIT 1ST
^SO U SPIT 1ST
..I'M GHOST..
(P.S. IF I LOOSE TO A UK BATTLER THEN I WISH TO BE SHUN'D FOR LIFE!)

[.:FiorZ:.]

aight..............
shit is up.............

*stares at BROOKLYN and steps to the bitch*

aight...yo...yo

you were itchin to engage fists and discover the goal like a virgin, i'll pound your record with one round like Philipousis servin//1
the tables turnin similar to when Goliath demanded a confrontation with David, my immense talent will produce total onslaught like Christ our Saviour//2
i've witnessed wannabe rappers, but your the first wannabe city, that's like trynna produce a thief out of some muthafucka who isn't shifty//3
i'll discharge toxic punches that'll leave your mind paralytic, the prospect of you beatin me is like shaggin a whore and not becoming infected//4
i aint givin you a thing from this encounter except this verse as a souvenir, cos your about to get slashed away like Van Gough's chosen ear//5
you'll be livin in fear when i come full force just like a wining hound, due to the quality in every line, i've left Brooklyn spellbound//6
your hell bound if you fuck with me, i've already rang the funeral bells, i destroy the alliance and all involved and leave only empty shells//7
every sound that comes out the hole in your face is total irony, im main course to this battle cos just like “2pac”, I’ve got “all eyez on me”//8
I feel sorry for mic check*, but who would wanna bite off rhymes so weak, I would rather watch “George Bush” bite on Tony Blair’s meat//9(bush got blair, ENGLISH prime minister, to help in the war on iraq)
Finisher:
your record reflects on the fact you battle newbees, I’ll snap you like a skinny twig, you wannabe a star but even if you called yourself BROOKLYN “smalls”, you still couldn’t be “Big”//10

*Mic Check bit off BROOKLYN and got banned (stupid mufucka)

[.:FiorZ:.]

yo, where u at, u wanted da fuckin battle..............
hurry up n post ur shit..........................................
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[BROOKLYN]

I'll Leave A Shit-Stain On Everything Fiori Dis-Claims And Dis-Play He Bitch-Made Like The Bone From Adam's Rib-Cage/1
Cockin-The-Piston Drop To Have Your Shit Rocked-In-An-Instant, I've Got More Of A Real Challenge Spit-Boxin-An-Infant/2

How Can You Keep Up With My Line-For-Line-Flow When You're 3 Hours-Behind And 5 Including Your-Time-Zone?/3
Fetchin-The-Win After I Bless-This-Kid He'll Need To Get His Head Checked More Than Any Microphone Ever-Did/4

Im Makin Sure You Croak-Late Just For Hopes-Sake And The Closest You'll Ever Come To Pussy Is A Post-Date/5
I Seal-Lips, Neal-Quick, Fiori Can Deal-Dick To A Whores Ass And Still Couldn't Fuck With Real-Shit/6

Twice Your Skill Tyson Style, You Lyin-Still? Cause My Punches Land Like Cooks At BBQ's..Behind-The-Grill/7
He's Keying For Wack-Reasons Im Leavin Your Distraught-Ass-Bleedin And Writin This Battle Off For Tax-Season/8

Your Better-Than-Worst, Is That Why You Edited-Your-Verse? With All Those Religious Words It's Like You Made It In-Church/9
What You Shoot-For? Win? Bounce With A New-Scar, My Fuck You Avatar Is More Hard-Core Than You-Are/10

[Inversry.]

brooklyn http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=67343 here's the battle make it 10lines max cos its 3:00am ere and im tire as fuck ok

[.:FiorZ:.]

my verse was edited to put make the word "english" stand out..............
oh, n by the way, didn't you say no feedin.......................
if you can't remember, just read the rules........................

now lets get some votes on this muthafucka........................

[BROOKLYN]

Originally posted by fiori
my verse was edited to put make the word "english" stand out..............
oh, n by the way, didn't you say no feedin.......................
if you can't remember, just read the rules........................

^
EXPLAINING WHY YOU EDITED WAS UNECESSARY(SWAYING)
AND I DONT THINK I FED OFF ANYTHING, IF I DID SHOW ME

[WarPlay]

damn that was hot but i cant vote even if i did brooklyn took it by far///////////////////////////////////////////////////

[~HoTTie~]

nice shit to the both of you...fiori my boy i liked that...wish u woulda came that hard on our battle not too long ago..but my vote goes to brooklyn again he was on fire like usual lol...punches ...wordplay...multi's was iight

but he won it ..point blank

vote Brooklyn

[.::KamikazE::.]

Vote..Brooklyn, much betta verse betta in all aspects
I didn't like fiori's flow much, sum end words didnt rhyme e.g (david, savior) but besides that Brooklyn's opener was killa

[BROOKLYN]

UPPIN FOR VOTES
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[Inversry.]

i wish i was a reg voter i PM ALLDIG TIME AAGO!!! but no reply fucking heck i want to vote in tha battle like heck who do i pm?????????????????? il vote in this to when i become a reg voter

[BROOKLYN]

SINCE ALLDIG IS ON VACATION I THINK YOU PM "Sand" OR "The End"


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[Violent~Wordz]

Heres An Link..Go Vote And Poll On It..::

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=66984


Vote - Brooklyn - Clearly Got This...Better Flow..Punches Etc....Overall Better Verse...Flori...Very Very Stretch Lines Yo...Try Shorting..The Filler...And Just Go At-Em...You Did Have An Nice Verse Though..-Peace...

Hit That Link Up..And Drop Honest Votes...The Both Of Yall...

[bone crusher]

both of ya'll kind of disappointed with your closers, but what can i say still both verses were great reads. both are a little long with the bars but if that's your style what can i say?

i had to reread both this was mad hard to drop a vote on.

but someone has to get it. flow was about even on both, both similar styles, both had good creatives the difference is punches and consistency. both were tight, but i felt BROOKLYN had a few that were above par for this battle and his consistency made the flow better. nice effort fellas.

vote:
BROOKLYN