Peyo
Raz
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10 lines
no crew/hate/dick ryde votes
feeding reccling prewriting etc.
I'll spit first, but we check in First.....verse due 30-40 minutes after check in.... (a bit tooooo long but i guess i'll be fair, so i won't catch no bitchin....)
And wit dat.................
LET THIS SHIT BEGIN
Yo Raz in this biatch checkin in..............
should drop in a lil ............
i guess peyo isn't gonna be online tonight so dawg Post asap.... so this shit will get moving and over wit...........
Quik shit ta get tha blood goin.....
uh uh yo.......uh executive shiiiiiiiiit.......uhhuh uh yo yo.....
yo ya posts on this site is just fuckin litterin//
this kats verse to me will prolly be "N.Y.G" co-written//
how can u really log on feelin good about yo skill//
thats fuckin stupid, like gangsta rap acceptin lauren hill//
nah dawg go ta tha "poetry" section kuz we all better than u//
no fuckin gangstaz will accept u, not even tha ones from stacker 2//
i don't jab and move, i just knock muhfuckaz out//
dawg if u on tha road ta stardom u needa finda new route//
yo from da suites ta da streets, bringin defeats, to all and each//
killa from lion ta leach, long ass reach rather choke slam than teach//
Throws Peyo da mic
word woulda liked more lines but oh well.....
CHeckin in just got on
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Beginning
Aiyo the executives said lets beat the N.Y.G for practice, shit they'd have a better chance havin sex with a cactus//
The fact is I'm merkin ya with ease, ask us, when the crew battle goes down, ya ain't gonna smash us//
Building Up
Ya learning from QB Snyper, ya biting all ya rhymes, the grand jury is inditing ya cause all your raps are crimes//
Ya mouth is filled with fecies cause you have shitty spits, ya crew wants ta throw ya out cause ya throw hissy fits//
Admit I'm nice, what do I gotta say it twice, I guess I do cause ya find it incomprehensable that in rap, I own a slice//
Ya using a three year olds blind vocabulary like ya chasing mice, ya at the tail of this site, ya gonna get diced//(in 3 blind mice there tails got diced off)
Ya a farmers wife, sittin in bed thinkin, oh my god I love this life//(another reference to 3bm)
Finisher
Give up now before ya get lost in this mans world cause I doubt ya can handle it//
ya use a bed pan cause ya too fat to get up, ya thought coloring yaself was how to tan a bit//
ahhhhh that was weak
honestly i was feelin raz on ths one but it was close very close
flow was about even, but i thought raz had betta punches
vote goes to raz, but this battle could go either way
good luk to both vote=raz
yo imma say nothincuz raz said he voted for me in his post in my battle then he voted ill so for that imma hold my vote
Now hold up did i vote for Ill? dude i could swore i voted for U in that shit............ Thats fuckin weird.........
yo i dont wanna sound like a dick but
FUCK I FUCKING WOULD HAVE A FUCKING WIN BY NOW I BET SHIITITITITITITIITITITITITITITITIy
well any way ill vote another battle from you 2 but im kinda hot in the head right now
i like both verses but raz had better punch lines
VOTE: RAZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=2
^^ hit my battle up and drop a fair vote ^^^
honestly i was feelin peyo much more-like the complexity an vocab-nice work peyo-much better then what u dropped against me in elite....vote-peyo
drop an honest vote here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...557#post627557
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yo uppin this 2-0 thanx for tha vote ceasar oh and Spirit check ya Pm......... aight..........................
aight man lol sorry bout the accusation but i won YEA that was the illest head beat yet so fuck yea im happy
vote.........raz
ok i know this is going to look like d/r but raz was short sweet and hard
also it was sweet the whole way
peyo your shit got talent but the ill ness in raz's rhyme took it
I was feeling peyo, cause his wordplay and structure, and flow. Raz had a good one, but his punches weren't his best...
VOTE=PEYO
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Im votin peyo b/c he had better wordplay. That 3-blind-mice spiel won me over, great battle from both sides though.
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