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    Letter for the Close Deceased, Feat Withersman

    HOOK x1
    Dear john dis letter means more then if it where to ma mom// a letter from da heart, loved ya homie as if we met at the start// nothin can ever tear us apart// dis letter is spit in da lyrical art// from me to you with hope we never be apart//

    HOOK x2
    Dear Paul dis letter means more then if it where to ma mom// a letter from da heart, loved ya homie as if we met at the start// nothin can ever tear us apart// dis letter is spit in da lyrical art// from me to you with hope we never be apart//

    Zainy....
    To ma dead brother, so close but not from the same mother//
    loved ya more then any other, cant wait to see you again//
    cant think how ta communicate wid ya so im spittin u dis letter//
    u where better then any other, understood me new ma mind//
    brother it wouldent matter if you where blind, id lead ya n help//
    n we'd still be tight, inseperabal, un-breakable, two of us//
    unmistakable, always n forever, u where clever i was big n brutal//
    i always whanted to settle wid ma fists, u whanted to settle//
    bein a true lyricalist, i considerd you better, so man please get this letter//
    unimistakable, ma brother n me, little n large back in da day//
    meetin in skool, me always actina a fool, u ma calmin influence//
    us meetin wernt a coincidence, as a consaquence we stuck to one another//
    became tight as brothers, many men tried to come between us n break us//
    no chance, they where committin suicide, u wid da lyrical genicide//
    me wid da bratality to match stalin any day, ripped challengers apart//
    we did both us together wid pride nothin to fear never had to hide//
    beside the hood n skool, we always actin kool, we where so funny//
    you remember?, always had da same shoes n suites, bitchs lookin, we new we where da cutest//
    then that fatal day, day i never forget nearly sent me mute, no longer cute//
    why where you their brother?, why wernt you with me brother? it was nothin//
    we always fell out, balled n shout, made it up no problem, why brother tell me//
    it was a stupid row over nothin, u said u needed a break cus u had a head ache//
    i said so go, u did upped n left room was mellow wid out ya glow, we had plans//
    had to go meet our girl fans, but u never showed, i waited an hour, whent home had a shower//
    never relised what happend i never new, only a select few new what really happend to you//
    then ma cat told me, bitch i thought she was lyin, tryin to fold me up inside//
    i ran from ma room all the way to da hospital, most inhospitapal of places//
    every corner brings a dozen new faces, but not yours, where where u brother//
    walked the wrong avenue, ended up meetin new mothers, but fuckit i only whanted ma brother//
    then outta da blew i found u, this looked worse den da flew, i knew---- right away//
    i could tell ya face was all grey,,, saw the docter thought come what may, wasent prepared//
    he told me i just stood looked n staired, glaired, felt scared n empty, all alone//
    please brother call me on ma phone, wake me from ma nightmare,, but no u aint never gunna be their//
    shit this aint never fair, i couldent beleive i was never seein u again, whanted to turn the clock back//
    to way back when then, but couldent, new i shouldent feel sorry for maself, couldent help it//
    ma heart just upped n melted right their, was determined to find out how, needed guidance what to do now//
    whent to ma hood, tryin to find out, be able to understood, met some kid, he told me what happend//
    apparently u met wid some cats, tell me brother is this a true fact, shit didnt stop their//
    u where angry wid me, so u got in a stolen car, u guys didnt get very far, before you where spotted//
    police on ya tail, some unkown male-- drivin dat car, to fast n to far, left da road, hit da wall//
    u where thrown from the car, onto the pavement, head beat in, died instantly right their//
    so now no longer a pair, just me left alone wid da guilt of ur death, wishin for mine//
    feelin empty body reelin from the news, 10 years gone buy, ma pain is as fresh as ever//
    forget you never, please read ma letter, i really need to make shit better with you//
    need to no ur proud of me, still lovin me completly, i dont no how u can show me//
    but maybe ill just no, ill never be complete, lovin u was ma biggest feat, shit i gotta go eat//
    so ima end dis shit here, i hope one day your show me i got nothin to fear//
    until that day, ima love ya more each n every way, never push ya memory away//
    and when ma time comes, dont no when dont no where, but i aint gunna be scared//
    we can meet n greet at those whight gates up in heaven, feel complete whenever god plans for us to re-meet//

    Hook
    Dear Paul dis letter means more then if it where to ma mom// a letter from da heart, loved ya homie as if we met at the start// nothin can ever tear us apart// dis letter is spit in da lyrical art// from me to you with hope we never be apart//

    Withersman......
    Yo, John was my nigga died about to years ago//
    didn't know it would result to this I didn't know//
    He was always down for whatever, through any level of beef//
    even if it resulted in him being deceased//
    he had it worse thasn any of us in the crew//
    broke, homeless, no love from his parents, we were his family that was true//
    he would always come to our houses just to stay under a homeful roof//
    he was on an everlastin struggle to always stay proof//
    why did it have to turn out this way?//
    I remember the even as if it were yesterday//
    I told you not to fuck with them, yea you were bein hard headed//
    but you went behind my back, Dave said it//
    You don't know how much that act pissed me off//
    but I understood how much steam you had yo blow off//
    when we found you....it wasnt a pretty site//
    didn't think you would be out here at this time of night//
    TJ drove us to the hospital, we saw the blood on your shirt//
    you don't know how bad it was for us to see you in fatal hurt//
    the doctor said that you passed away along the trip//
    when Dave heard those words he punched the wall and flipped//
    your funeral, I couldn't believe it, your mom was ballin'//
    your dad couldn't believe you were in the casket stallin//
    Dave got those mutha fuckas back, hell we all did//
    we all graffitied your name and picture on a wall, it still stands there without a skid//
    signed by all of us, TJ, Dave, James, Martin, Caleb, Marcus and Me//
    John a.k.a Outlaw rest in piece//


    Hook
    Dear John dis letter means more then if it where to ma mom//
    a letter from da heart//
    loved ya homie as if we met at the start//
    nothin can ever tear us apart// dis letter is spit in da lyrical art//
    from me to you with hope we never be apart//

    Hook
    Dear John dis letter means more then if it where to ma mom//
    a letter from da heart//
    loved ya homie as if we met at the start//
    nothin can ever tear us apart// dis letter is spit in da lyrical art//
    from me to you with hope we never be apart//
    Last edited by Genetikz; July 3rd, 2003 at 01:55 PM

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    uppin this pa you did hot as a collab it was perfect
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    thanx dawg uppin
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    you peep my new shit dawg it has like 2 posts on it from but i want to see if it worth reading
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    uppin 1

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    yo i thought that the 1st verse was jus ok, i thought that it was kind off balance, but it was kool, i was really feelin the second i thought that shit was hard keep doin yo thang niggaz
    stay up

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    Withersman's verse was tight, Zainy's verse was aiight. Didn't rhyme very well in some spots... might just be the way I read it... I'm not sure... Peace...

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    This was fucking long as hell, no way I'm reading all of it, but I did read parts.

    Both of you need better bar structure, the flow was too choppy. I lost it in various parts in both verses.

    Some real lyrics by both, but nothing really stood out to me as dope.

    Keep droppin.
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    all taken, up

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    Withersman you are blowin up man..your verse was damn near flawless...Zainy you had some ill moments...keep it up fellas

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    kool UppiN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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