srry i let yall down with this one couldnt meet my unreal expectations
srry i let yall down with this one couldnt meet my unreal expectations
Last edited by ThE_uNrEaL_1; May 29th, 2003 at 11:17 PM
like i have time to read all this, but what i read sounds really nice dog keep wrighting!
Grim85.
hey tanx man ppl judge my shit then drop a link and ill judge u
uppin for some responses come on peeps ill return the fav i promise
this was pretty good...it seemed kinda tedious. there were a lot of rhyming words, so that it almost seemed like a dr seuss kinda thing....it had a generally good message, but for some reason I wasn't really feelin in. didn't reach out and grab me or anything, but it was still good.
Peace
wordperfect?
..o0Pure0o..
lol dude he called your rhymes dr.seuss style lolso that it almost seemed like a dr seuss kinda thing
Grim85.
it was kinda o well it was meant to be rhyming
holla @ you nicas!
Grim85.
it was nice. kind of long. but what the hell isn't. maybe a pimps love life. *shrug* yeah, anyway, the chorus was nice, if sang slowly. i guess this is a slow dark song? or fast and angry? i'm not sure, couldn't tell, still alright though.
peace
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thanx come on more reviews
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