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    sen
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    Question Just Anotha Madman....

    Journey within my Mind
    cuz I can't seem ta find
    a reason for the mysteries in time
    the messages come thru in rhyme
    our existence so sublime

    I open my eyeS & to my suprISE!
    SO many LIVES!
    TO many LIES!
    Cuttin like KNIVES!
    as Everyone DENIES!!!!!
    THE PAIN!
    that makes many go insane
    i see the name a the game
    Death 4 Greed/Money n Lust
    whatever happened to
    In God we Trust

    (Chorus)
    Just anotha madman,thought he was a mystic
    I wonder sometimes,is God playin a trick
    Cuz too much Truth ill make ya sick
    Ya gotta be aware of the path you pick
    Just anotha madman,thought he was a mystic
    -=_==--=--_-=_=-

    With-holdin wisdom from the masses
    a created seperation of the classes
    Confusin me with yer education
    Shit, I gain more knowledge durin
    Masturbation n Meditation
    Intoxication n Spiritual Elevation
    and Most important Copulation

    I was a Buddhist a Hindu a Tibetan Monk
    a Christian a Muslim even an atheist Punk
    Now i'm up off my knees
    prayin ta God/Goddess please
    won't ya let me in on all yer mysteries
    illuminate the keys of Divine thoughts seeds
    an understandin of what it all means
    it's so much more than what it seems.

    (Chorus)
    Just anotha madman,thought he was a mystic
    I wonder sometimes,is God playin a trick
    Cuz too much Truth ill make ya sick
    Ya gotta be aware of the path you pick
    Just anotha madman,thought he was a mystic
    -=_==--=--_-=_=-

    so step into anotha life & rethink yer own
    were all in this together, never alone
    ya gotta be yourself, not another drone
    remember yer made a light not just skin n bone
    and no matter what happens, Were all Goin HOME*

    ta know the cosmic purpose of our birth
    and what lifes worth
    just Imagine Heaven, On Mother Earth

    (Chorus)
    Just anotha madman,thought he was a mystic
    I wonder sometimes,is God playin a trick
    Cuz too much Truth ill make ya sick
    Ya gotta be aware of the path you pick
    Just anotha madman,thought he was a mystic
    Just anotha madman,thought he was a mystic
    Just anotha madman,thought he was a mystic
    (fading)


    --=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-
    *H.O.M.E=H.eaven O.n M.other E.arth



    Thanx 4 readin.....
    appreciate any feedback

    peace
    Souls Journey
    Last edited by sen; May 29th, 2003 at 12:57 PM

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    [COLOR=royal blue]Hmmmm Not Bad,A Bit Long Tho & You Need 2 Up Ur Wordplay & Vocab. Okai... pZ... Spitzophrenic[/COLOR]
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  3. #3
    sen
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    afta readin others shyt---I see what ya mean----
    thanx



    uppin^^^^^^^^`~~^^

    peace

  4. #4
    sen
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    uppin for some more insight----

    preparin 4 a battle


    just open my mind
    let the punches flow--

    peace

    thanx

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    B Newz
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    "Death 4 Greed/Money n Lust
    whatever happened to
    In God we Trust"


    Liked that alot. keep elevatin.

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    keep it real, your original and honest, you sound like somebody who has dealt wit alot, good shit.

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    sen
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    keepin my Eye on spirit---Creator in All
    life's dealt me it's punches---many others been through some worse shit than me though---my blessings go out to all-fightin the battle to be themselves with the cards dealt--especially when shorthanded this time around-

    that which doesn't kill us only makes us stronger....or makes us go insane so we just don't care anymore---little lesson in appearances------


    "Emancipate yourself from mental slavery,none but ourselves can free our minds." A Prophet--named Bob


    thanx 4 ya peepin
    peace

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    sen
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    uppin 4 more feedback---

    always lookin 2 improve


    peace

    thanx all

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    very nice flow dog, i really enjoyed reading it and hope you put more songs out like this one, it flowed nicely and the rhymes were dope, drop another one real soon dog holla!
    Grim85.

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    ThE_uNrEaL_1
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    nice flow, enjoyed it alot i agree wit whoever said u gotta up ur vocab, but it flows and rhymes nicely, good drop

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    Ill drop........Vocab was there , and wordplay was also tight
    Last edited by Bashire; May 29th, 2003 at 09:36 PM

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    VOcab has to be said wus ILL as Bash said.............contend wus nice

    sick drop

    peep mine Womens Worth

  13. #13
    your_end
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    lil lengthy for my likings but whatever....

    it was aight... hmmm vocab was cool...

    all in all, just ya average post...

    peace

  14. #14
    sen
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    movin on up-----critique it please

    thanX 4 All

    peace

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    Genetikz
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    tight, i liked it,,, u obviusly put effort in to dis drop,,, respect

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