as any lines as you want
no d/r
go for yours
The2ndSystem
Young Brown
as any lines as you want
no d/r
go for yours
"...You can't beat The System..."
Keep sucking...
Here it comes...
Keep F***ing
You want my cum?
Here have some.
Oh yah...
Every single one of my verses, a part of the latice
can't believe you took the challenge, w/ ur current battle status
but it doesn't matter much, you see Young Brown,
you could be 20/0 and I would still beat u down
So what if you'd lose w/ one of my one-liner raps
I'll kill you slowly 'cus honestly, I've seen finer crap
What the f*** do u think yo doin' here on the front lines
Is it not already appearent that this site is mine
After I knocked you down, all of that blood on yo lip
looks like your mom's @$$ after it was mine's to rip
or my cum in her mouth, the way she let it drip
when she sucked it from my cock to take a big sip
So when you know your place, see ur self to the door
'cuz yo zero/three stats are about to become zero/four.
"...but it can beat you..."
thats was pretty good dog
as soon as young brown spits
ill vote on this
check out my battle against MoF
Peace
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12 and a half 1/2 hours later...
yo Brown wtf is takin so long?!
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yo, get ready for disappointment, cuz I’m takin this challenge/
I knew all I needed were a few lines to knock you off balance/
your run off wit yo mouth, I’m glad you challenged me/
cuz even if you hit me with your best flows, you couldn’t damage me/
who gives a fuck if my records ‘O’-and-‘3’/
you forgot to 'pack' your lyrics wit meaning, cuz your flows-empty/
what, are you just lookin for records, and choosing the worst/
are you like, “Alright, I think I’ll battle him first”/
you obviously didn’t do your homework, cuz I got other battles pending/
this your first battle and your already near your ending, while my flows are still ascending/
you’re like tha punk bitch in school that only fights kids smaller than him/
well guess what, this aint school, and we aint children/
get yo weak shit rejected, pulling a stunt-like-that/
if you could remember where you found it, then please put the mic-right-back/
your flows are shameful, that’s why your verse isn’t felt/
I never battled a cat who literally defeated himself/
if I took the time to explain, you still wouldn’t get it/
you pulled a bitch move, and that’s not how you earn a win to your credit/
you’re past your prime, I think you need to retire/
I’m dropping hot shit on you like bird doo-doo that caught fire/
yo this cat aint realistic, I’ll have his wig-split/
while this bitch-sit, infront of the mirror puttin on her lip-stick/
you couldn’t get attention if you were in the middle of tha mall and had your wrist-slit/
you lyrical misfit, next time you come back make sure you know how to spit-shit/
or I’ll permanently attach you to my cock to suck and call you my dick-tic/
ya dig trick?/
"...You can't beat The System..."
Hold on bitch, 'cuz I ain't done yet
I'll teach dis fool to control his teretts
Try once more and find some better shit
Think this time before you click "Submit"
to The2ndSystem, the plague, the pestilence
after12 &a 1/2 hours it should atleast make sense
I'll slap the brown from yo name to yo pants
you fallin short every time u try to advance
nothin u make can match what I contrive
I c the 0/4 records taken, so I'll make it zero/five
oh yah that's right you got other battles on the line
looks like I'm gonna have to make it zero/nine
ya c I do my homework, but there ain't much to do
All yo other raps are crap and this one is too
After the first eleven hours, thought u'd b a no-show
but I'll give u 1 mor chance, & this time make it flow
"...but it can beat you..."
u both did
good, u had equal punches
and flow
but 2ndSystem had more
complexity and style
vote=2ndSystem
Peace
check out my battle against Young Brown
...were still in here
uppin fo votes peoples...
Peace
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BATTLE WAS PRETTY WEAK BUT WAS AIGHT.............MY VOTE GOES TO BROWN.....REASON WHY.........HE HAD SLIGHT BETTER PUNCHES AND HE HAS A BATTLE RECORD
VOTE=> YOUNG B
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=46052
A YO YOUNG B RETURN THE FAVOR AT MY BATTLE.......VOTE FOR WHO YOU THINK DID BETTER........AIGHT
A YO 2ND U WANNA BATTLE............ITS UP TO YOU DAWG...........SET IT UP AND PM ..............UR DECISION
young got this one on lock.....he had betta flow, disses, lyrics....
Vote for my shit
DarkForce vs. Syke
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damn, you came back to battle with a shittier verse/
it’s like a rapper with no flows, gave you his curse/
the second-system, should not invest-in-rhythm/
he wouldn’t be good enough in here if he brought the best-in-with-him/
if you would’ve really done your homework, you’d a seen that I’m neva a no-show/
I’ll fuck up your whole-flow, fo-sho, and leave your whole-flow, no-moe/
bitch if you were gonna spit twice, you should of just told me/
even if it was 2 verses to 1, you still couldn’t out flow me/
I see we’re the same age/
but my expertise will smash you in a few lines before you finish your eighth page/
you lied when you said you could defeat me if I was ‘20-and-O’/
cuz you wouldn’t battle someone with one win, so stop lyin-you-hoe/
if this was all you got, then you need some mo shit/
just face it mothafucka, you were born ‘trick’/
you’re just a big mouth like an overgrown lip, it’s true/
if these were separate battles, you’d be ‘O and 2’/
I thought about it before I clicked, and I still wanna kill ya/
your name should just be theGHOST, cuz caint nobody feel ya/
''...better...''
you still gotta work on the syllable count for your lines
good punches though...
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One more thing, don't be gettin all indignant about 2 spits when u wait 12 hours to spit, & then u come out with a rap almost twice as many lines as mine
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