RULES:
8-20 LINES
NO HATE VOTES
POLL ATTACHED (FOR VOTES)
2 ROUNDS
mine will come up in a few minutes.
Feeble Minded
good dictator
RULES:
8-20 LINES
NO HATE VOTES
POLL ATTACHED (FOR VOTES)
2 ROUNDS
mine will come up in a few minutes.
aight....
im ready for this.................................good luck dawg..................................
now i know what you were hoping for but I just wont quit
hooking up all the people with that funky new shit
things for you are starting to look pretty grim
cause i'm the biggest pimp since iceberg slim
i'm continuing the battle with rhymes just so versatile
you better stick to memorizing the lines from that movie 8 mile
you claim you're as good as that boy eminem
but then I mock you and your value system
breaking out the Simpsons, yeah i know my pop culture
come up with something that nice, you lyrical vulture
picking the rotten meat off the bones of your betters
the best you can create are a bunch of verbal chain letters:
"pass this song to 20 people or you'll soon be dead
trust me, this shit is legit it happened to this guy called fred"
what the fuck do you think you are trying to pull
pushing this crap over our eyes like it was wool
you should really quit sending your waste out in bulk
cause you wouldn't like me angry, like the incredible hulk
yo
you better pass this on, and be ready for the casket/
cuz in the last bit, i can have this fag arrested for harassment/
so dont even think that ya shitty ink can sink me/
ill have you more outta 'sync' that timberlake see?/
i envision my flows, thats why this time my language is better/
i wrote my decision to kill you lyrically in a chain letter/
im hot like 100 degree heat, wearin a heavy sweater/
this guys a rookie, that why i take and 'vet ya'/
i was born with a set of traits that set you straight/
you await your fate while i debate whether to desecrate/
u take and conujugate -when i tell ya u gon meet the gate/
'crossing u over' like 'john edwards' while doin the figure eight/
the little bitch is waiting for this battle to be over-scum/
but to 'beat' me ya gota put my dick in ya hand and 'make it cum'/
'2+2' equals meta-'four', and the faggot likes that sum/
he about to go and 'catch' the way i 'kick' a pun/
to win ya gotta confine my flow but u fucking wit the wrong type of guy/ this guys a little pussy so i know it wont take much to make him cry/ when he flows, hes just wasting rhymes/ and i got 'all day' but hes still a 'waste of time'
nice batttle
but wait...there is still a round left my bad homie........ur turn now............................................... .................
YO ITS BEEN LIKE AN OUR AND I HAVE TO GO...VOTES........................................ ......................<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
one line of your's i thought was pretty clever
but at a ratio of 1 to 20 you'll be behind forever
i liked the shit with the 2s and the "meta-four"
but only one math rhyme so i'll give you some more
your other rhymes are insignificant in the statistical
lines so old they border on the archialogical
your words are rediculous, damn near forgetable
hyping yourself as timeless, but i'm the integral
your mental level is on the elementary
compared to you, i've got the MC PHD
i'm complex, while your skills are imaginary
my lyrics have meaning while yours are arbitrary
now i set a vector increasing your pain
infinite like Pi are your lines mundane
try to awe me with length, but you gotta behold
twenty pounds of your crap aint worth an ounce of my gold
ten points if you know all the math references
At feeble minds first rap, I thought he had it, but Good Dictator knocked his @$$ out in the second round. No matter who wins, this was still an good battle. The last one had some killer flow with the word play
YO
this cat needs to practice, i cant remember past the introduction/
talking about 'mathematics', now his vote faces a 'reduction'/
dont let my flow fool ya, i do this shit for habit and leisure/
throw him a 'ruler', so his rhymes can find some good 'measure'/
i pull out the three win 'hat trick' so ima magician on a mission/
im feeble, but this guys flow commissions my condition/
throw knives at ya, cuz in rhymes im causing a massacre/
go cry bitch..someone give the little baby his passifir/
its all a blur, but u can call me sir, cuz im a vet and i cause a stir/
you refer to me in numerals/ but ill cut off ya legs, cuz u got a LOW stature, and ya soon to fall/ i write it unforgettable, its soon to set on ya/ im beating you to death with my case of writers block/ my lyrics 'sweep you off your feet' and knock off your socks/
i'll kill you lyrically and have voters numerically grading my wrath/
ur flow is more like a five, not a ten, if you stop and do the math/
im digging ur grave with spades slowly and slitting ur throat with blades/
i drop verbal grenades, but he only acts like he can rap like we playin charades/
elevate more next time...
good job. a little off topic as well as a few questionable rhymes (massacre, pacifier, etc), but a very good showing nevertheless. nice battle
i dont feel u tried as hard as u can, not tryin to be disrespectful.
but what the hell is an off topic rhyme???? in battles u can rhyme about whatever u want...as long as u go from one topic to another smoothly which i did...
my vote goes to feeble minded...
he just had better flow, vocab, punches.. and liked both of his verses
vote: feeble minded
chek out my battle vs. QB Snyper
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Feeble Minded:
ok, on further examination, I can say you were on topic (nebulous reasoning to the max), but I was under the idea that rap sort of rhymes. your structure leaves a good bit to be desired. with better formatting it might be clear, but in a bigass chunk, it is much harder to see. maybe i am new at this, but i see lines without rhymes in your attacks.
Last edited by good dictator; May 22nd, 2003 at 11:29 PM
aight.. i poll voted
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