lilsmokey vs Rise

[Rise]

rules:
10lines max, Not 2in 1 line, or 1bar equalls 2 lines, just 10 lines..OK
Explained and Poll votes will decide
No Crew/D.Ryding/or Hate votes
No Recycling...that means no bitting off each other verses either
No Prewrites...all keystyle, be honest with it
check in and we will have a 45 minutes keying limit....ready?

[lilsmokey]

check in................................................ .................................................. .................................you Ready ??............................

[Rise]

Yep
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Start Keying

[lilsmokey]

imma rip out ya heart and lungs and replace them with ma verbal toxins /
im more deadlier than a group of water Mocasins /
i punch "lines" in ya chest to give you scoliosis /
i saw ya mom askin for creame fillin at hostes /
these brutal lyrics are gonna beat ya ass worse than a round trip to a prison /
the only way you'd flow looser than me is if you lost your tendons /
let me mention the suspension ya life has when ya clentchin /
on here rappin like some kind of minister /
my raw sensability is enough for a finisher /
i make you hotter than having scarlet fever..... im the only mutha fucka to become the lyrical sinister /

holla

had to hurry thunder storm is starting

[Conflict]

yo i'ma hit up this shit when it's done, but can ya hit up mine
kerrdezzy vs. punk'd
pcccc............................................. .

[lilsmokey]

i cant poll vote sorry............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................./.

[Rise]

Read......set...go.....

**Nas beat drops**

**Gun Go's Off**
**they shootin**


its like all he pressed was the long key on his KeyBoard, the way this amauters got boards::
They "Blank"...cause we see threw you<--->My AVATAR SHOT YOURS::

Peep tha avatars...lol

He's more pussy than a 80's-Play:cats)
dam his punches suck, even his "bites" dont connect like "Macy Grey::

smoke I'm splitting you, especially cause your in the N.othing B.ut S.oft L.yrics crew::
Dont worry you'll still be 4-0 after I win, cause even your loss dont want to stick with you::

LiL hopes we, dont see, how I leave his verse a "lil smokey"::
Pussy-cat wheres Josie?....I'm at the top NOW, while your like aids patients, your getting ill SLOWLY::

Rock your Bell..south, like I droped your Nokia::
after this, everyone will be glad your gone, just like that show"Cita"::

Anoying MuFukah........Rise

[lilsmokey]

shit was hot but you callin me a mutha fucka ???....................................??
uppin for votes

[Rise]

Lol.....yep..............................
J/k.............yes I am.............not........lol

Up this MuFuaka for votes.........

[lilsmokey]

uppin for sum votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...................holla

[N4$A]

i say Rise coz he had some good punches like the avatar line...tight but smokey ur shit was a tight aswell i just think rise had the edge

[lilsmokey]

vote doesnt count did not poll vote.........................REMEMBER TO POLL VOTE PEOPLE...................peace

[lilsmokey]

need votes peeps............................................. ..........
remember to poll vote aswell

[west]

tha aviator line took it for rise i'd say,liked both dudes flows,thought it was close but as i have to decide i'm goin rise.
Poll = Rise,return tha favor,peace.

[lilsmokey]

1-0 your favur holla peeps and i'll return the favur............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...................................peace