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    "My Funeral": Another song by yours truly

    *I used the last part of "Hail Mary's" hook just to tell you*

    "My Funeral"

    {Verse 1}
    Today I was shot, on the block//
    by a .45 glock//
    Niggas who had beef whith me came to make it stop//
    it's fucked up ain't it, the way these niggas came in my place//
    plastin through my fuckin dorrs pullin out the aces(guns)//
    It was about five niggas dressed in all black//
    some came from the front and some came from the back//
    you could tell they were hired from the way the were packin//
    and the clappin, was so unbelieveable that I started crackin//
    the niggas had some dragon fire breathin in their eyes//
    from the sight I could that tonight I was gonan die//
    Whenmy nerves jolted, I escaped from the upper window//
    I saw feathers flyin so a bullet had to hit my pillow//
    I was scared, I wouldn't dare, to go against those niggas//
    bullets ricochetin from the way they were squezzin those triggas//
    I was able to get down about two blocks//
    then I heard the sound of a .45 glock//

    {Hook}
    Someone's bleeding//
    the number of doves we need is sixteen//
    As you can see, Now someone has died tonight//
    Michael withers la da da da//
    Someone's bleeding//
    the number of doves we need is sixteen//
    As you can see, Now someone has died tonight//
    Michael Withers la da da da//

    {Verse 2}
    I heard a kid said, " HEY DUCK!"//
    What the fuck?, I ran out of luck//
    who ever knew this bullet would make my spirit rise up//
    I hit the ground so hard that it seemed as if I made it shake//
    Couldn't dodge the bullets like I was in "The Matrix" causin an earth-quake//
    I took the fact that it was the end of my life//
    but I did not understand why it had to happen over strife//
    (sirens wailing) When the papramedics I was put on the strecher//
    (gunshots) the bullet puncutured my long I wasn't gettin any better//
    I was dazzy, gettin crazy but they hadme strapped in//
    I was thinkin, "No , no not another dead rapper story again"//
    if you look at all the rappers who've died in the past//
    most ofthem died from a fuckin gunblast//
    My eyes were rollin back and my breath was slippin away//
    in two days I'll be layin peacefully in my grave//

    {Hook}
    Someone's bleeding//
    the number of doves we need is sixteen//
    As you can see, Now someone has died tonight//
    Michael Withers la da da da//
    Some's bleeding//
    the number of doves we need is sixteen//
    As you can see now someone has died tonigh//
    Michael Withers la da da da//

    {Verse 3}
    My funeral cost about two thousand//
    tears droppin, people faintin, and strong emotions were poundin//
    It reminded me of Aaliyah's death and man I couldn't take it//
    when i heard the news I thought it was some fake shit//
    but I knew it was my turn for me to go away//
    I hada flashback of my life, of the better days//
    when I was a rookie, makin all those records//
    it was like the tale of the sheep and the leapord//
    but my time was brutally put to a rest//
    this time I was the one with a hole in the chest//

    {Hook}
    Someone's bleeding//
    The number of doves we need is sixteen//
    As you can see, Now someone has died tonight//
    Michael Withers la da da da//
    Someone's bleeding//
    the number of doves we need is sixteen//
    As you can see, Now someone has died tonight//
    Michael Withers la da da da//
    RIP MANET

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    pretty good pretty good. the only thing i had against it was the .45 glock, try not to use stuff twice....

    return the favor hit my shit up in Open mic

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    nice work..it was long and this late at night. But still I woke up just to read it. Nice peice keep elevating work on vocab a little OoNnEe

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    aight thanx yall
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    this was alrite but the thing is, this song is only good if its fact not fiction

    hiy my shit up its callled "Remain unrecognized"
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    this drop was Aight

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    thanx yall DONT SLEEP ON THIS PEOPLE!!!!!
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    Come on dont sleep on this
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    Come on people
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    THAT......WAS......TIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ima car that goes Quik and i stay slick. dont fuck wit me cuz it useless
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    Thanx dawg. COME ONE PEOPLE DONT SLEEP ON THIS!!!!!
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    COME ON PEOPLE DONT SLEEP ON THIS !!!!!!!!!!!
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    People plez look at this
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