RULES:
20 Lines Max
First to 5 Votes Or 3 - 0 KO
No Dyckrydin Vote Or Hatin Votes
RYME TYME OR EmceeTrizt can't Vote on this coz they Hatin on me.
Pz
Quil-$pit
Opponent
RULES:
20 Lines Max
First to 5 Votes Or 3 - 0 KO
No Dyckrydin Vote Or Hatin Votes
RYME TYME OR EmceeTrizt can't Vote on this coz they Hatin on me.
Pz
Last edited by Quik-$pit; March 27th, 2003 at 09:25 AM
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Yo' i'm dropin' lyrical bombz with extreme rtikulate measures on yer ass//
why you callin yourself rtikulate you got no style, no treasures or cash//
I'm flowin like a river with a lightening flash and fire up under my ass//
I'm like a bomb hittin' Iraq with an almighty crash//
I'm gonna rip you to peices and serve for dinner on a Platinum Platter//
My lyrics got game hittin you hard so you crumble and shatter//
Your the next victim of Quik-$pit and 187 Recordz just got phater//
You be writin your freestyle slow like a letter just tryna be better//
your lyrics are wack while mine are hotter then a double barreled sweater//
Cutting into you is easier than when Charles Manson cuts into his prey//
Slicin you with my lyrical razor blades so you can't run away//
I'll reveal all your insides like Kurt Kobain on his suicide day//
I'll make sure you remember my name like its the only thing you say//
Swimming round your brain like a record stuck on play//
You don't want me to verbaly torture you with my spit//
but your on the lyric stretch rack gettin drained of shit//
You say that and this but you chokin in a bowl of your own piss//
I will never choke i'm in tha lift, Elevating to the level of Jada Kiss//
Spit yer shit as soon as you can
nice rhyme m8
i will..just got back from track..so ima spit
This is Quik's Most Tragic-of-Moments, Cuz like *Tampered Bombs* im 'Crossen His Wires' so he Wont Last-With-Explosives.....
My Wrath-is-Ferocious, Watch as I Adapt-to-Opponents, Maken This Kid 'Admire My Flow' as if my Raps-is-a-Token....
Fill-This-Fool-with-Quotes, Even with 'Guitars and Knives, he Still couldnt come up with *Killa-Music-Notes*..
Like 'Violent Priests' ill Abuse-His-Hope,
Bruise-His-Throat, Worser then *Meth Addicts* inhaling Fumes-of-Dope....
Quik Bites-Rappen, even with 'Glitter on his Lashes' he couldnt be EYE-Catchen....
Ya Defined-Wack-Kid, cuz you 'Out of this World' like an UnIndentified-Atlas.....
Ima Rule-This-Enden, Cuz Quik's gon 'Desinigrate', as if im Shooten Pools-Of-VENOM...
Take a Look as i Ridicule-Ya-Percentage, ya Wack!!, Now ima Attack and Rip-Thru-ya-Appendix......
-The End of Quik's Career-
Ill leave ya 'music in sectionz' when I Split-ya-Mic-Wire...
Im 'spreadin illnezz to churches' hopen to Hit-ya-Night-Choir!!!
Quik is like 'Asthmatic Track stars', cuz Hes known for Loosin-his-breath..
Choosin-for-death, Ive got 'Lava Hollow Tipz' that'll Ooze-in-ya-chest!!!......
Ill Brawl-with-Fist, cuz like 'Babies that cant Walk', Im Haven you Crawl-with-Witzz...
Come Raw-with-Spits, The Only thing we can 'Agree On' about you and ya Crew is that Y.all-A.int-S.hit...
Switch
get schooled kid . . know~this~bitch, your~ flow~is~shit, so stop pretending~ knowledge.....
your chances of beating Rtik don't exist . . . Like Lebron James attending~college..
Admit this...you must be begging to get your~shit~kicked...so i'll place you on the~ r.i.p~list....
shit~bitch...beat me? you got no (w)rapping presence, like jewish kids on christmas..
-Game Over....Youngsta-
Wot tha fuck Rtikulate did i not say 20 lines MAX??????????
that is 20 line
yo that is 20 lines man........................
Rtikulate got this one man.............I was feelin it..........
Qiuk not hotein' or anything but it sound like you kept saying the same thing but in different meanings.........."I'm gonna" was said like crazy and I like how you stayed on him but still Rtikulate got this one.
VOTE????????Rtikulate
Break Down:
Quil-$pit:
Fav Lines: "You say that and this but you chokin in a bowl of your own piss//
I will never choke i'm in tha lift, Elevating to the level of Jada Kiss//"
Flow: I think the flow in your rhyme was worth 10/10
Punches: The Punch Lines where good but you should have hit harder
Multi's: You had some good multi's in there which i like
Rtikulate:
Fav Lines: " get schooled kid . . know~this~bitch, your~ flow~is~shit, so stop pretending~ knowledge.....
your chances of beating Rtik don't exist . . . Like Lebron James attending~college.."
Flow: The Flow in your rhyme wasn't that good it was tacky, if there was a beat in there it would be all over the place.
Punches: Your Punch Lines where good also, but you did hit harder than Quil-$pit
Multi's: You also had some good multi's but Quil had more
Vote= Quil-$pit
Reason: The Flow is what did it for me, Dont get me wrong but Rtikulates verse was off the hook but quil's was better
Pz
Aight it was 20 lines MY Bad just read it wrong.
and wot tha fuck "I'm gonna" was said like crazy"
That was said once you crazy gurl, did you read the rhymes or just vote for the sake of it????
All good tho
1 - 1
Pz
uppin
YO {Poll vote goes to Q..cuz he came HArder overall
aight 2 - 1 Quik-$pit
Uppin Votes People
Yo this is gettin slept on people
Uppin Votes
Pz
DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS BATTLE IS DOPE!!!!!!!!!
Quick and Rtik both had some hard as rhymes.
This is a fuckin hard decision.
If I could vote for both of you I would
But I'm gonna vote for Rtik so I can tie both of you up.
This battle was dope.
You two should collaborate on a freestyle or somethin.
Those rhymes were the shit.
RIP MANET
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