drug related: 1of 4 verses
Personifying absolute power I tower
over these cowards
Even though my soul’s worlds apart
drifting threw flowers
Living more pipe dreams then Mario
Luigi and bowser
Girls tell about their dreams of gold
so welcome to golden showers
So splish in a gold splash with a wish
you can hold last
That you will out pass this out cast when
the bombs blast
Rolling tradition tight like a spiff and
using this last hit
To watch everything you ever held dear
fall to ash
i thought it was straight... nice structure to the flow i thought,,, i think the last line was a typo maybe not but it dont rhyme.. im sure you meant ashes instead of ash.. but yeah nice overall ill watch for the rest..
yea.. that's the shit, nice flow with not alot of words, it worked really well... "Living more pipe dreams then Mario
Luigi and bowser
Girls tell about their dreams of gold
so welcome to golden showers"
shit was dope, do some longer tings fo-sure
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good looking out blunted mc and incoragable im was fleppin blast with ash. but good lookin too
peace
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haha, yo thats aiight, gotta give props for the "Living more pipe dreams then Mario
Luigi and bowser" haha, that line was dope!
Peace out!!!!
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"Living more pipe dreams then Mario
Luigi and bowser"... yeah that was dope, sort of like an old-school, freestyle rhyme to me... hot
Yo man now I'm kinda looking forward to those next 3 verses... your concet sounds interesting and the flow, rhymes, and wordplay of this one where pretty good... hopefully you won't fall of with those next ones...
Peace
lol i wont fall off i never do
"Living more pipe dreams then Mario
Luigi and bowser
Girls tell about their dreams of gold
so welcome to golden showers"
Those really are great bars. The way it fit in with the piece, some of the best shit I've seen on this site. Most memorable. Made the piece. I'll look for the next one.
Last edited by LaRyan Shabaz; March 17th, 2003 at 02:35 AM
Living more pipe dreams then Mario
Luigi and bowser.. that line just gives a made visual, my fav. line in this piece, it was alil short but to the point, flow was good
keep spittin
peace out...
im puttin this is my sig
good looking outOriginally posted by LaRyan Shabaz
Those really are great bars. The way it fit in with the piece, some of the best shit I've seen on this site. Most memorable.
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I liked the shit. nice ass flow sceme and word-play. Keep postin fam
"Streets like a bullet in cancer, it'll swallow you up
or eat you from the inside and hollow you up."- Beanie Sigel
"Stare gun in face
heart flutters dawg it's startin to race
stuck in my place
nowhere to turn, nowhere to go
death right around the corner soon as the gauge exsplode"- Me
I ani't gonna front, that was some ill s*it
thanx. oh yeah and i also finiiished this peice.
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