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Thread: Respect Intellect *(its been a while)*

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    Respect Intellect *(its been a while)*

    as my basic instinct kicks in
    im thinkin of each m.c.'s extinction
    reachin for the pen, start teaching
    dont blink as the ink sinks in
    rips into paper, rape ya with percision
    did you a favor, savor the moment
    cant wait to flip each word's component
    till the page gets too dizzy to hold it
    idea's unfolded, for years ive known it
    owned it, only chose to expose prose recently
    vowels and consanents constantly speak to me
    wisper in my ear, voice travels secretly
    till it reaches my inner vacinity
    brought to the epitome of thought
    fought intimately with each awkward sort
    my thinking goes against everything i was taught
    writing is a sport, a game to be played well
    only the best are given the ILL label
    still, others can elevate and stay able
    to reach each level waiting if their faithful
    be greatful of knowledge cause life's a college
    every lesson learned reflects in dollars
    intellect enriches both paupers and scholars
    exscape the leashes of corporate collars
    walk with a strong spine to support the mind
    back your words to keep your thoughts in line
    this was just a mental process of mine
    before i light a battle & get on with shine
    Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
    They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it

    ArtificialIntelligence









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    lastpoet703
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    I was feelin the vocab and flow. NOt tryin to hard with words yet still spittin well

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    your flow is wicked,....nice and solid


    throughout you had good vocab.... keep it up....and if its been a while....then i say keep doin ya thing...1


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    Feedback is appreciated. Peace
    Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
    They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it

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    Alias-C
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    oh shit! that was tight man, no joke... started strong, finished strong, flow was definitely on point, vocab was strong... the word play was good...
    Only problem I had with this is that I wanted to see more...
    "only the best are given the ILL label
    still, others can elevate and stay able
    to reach each level waiting if their faithful" these lines stuck out for me man... true...
    Peace

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    nice kid .........as always rich ....nice to see u aint fell off

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    What up Mic... How you been? Thanks for the Reply... Peace
    Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
    They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it

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    damn pretty ill i was gonna do sumtin like this in a day or so

    pretty nice flow didnt really see any amazin punchs but ya vocab and flow made up for that id give this peice a 8.5/10

    mad original flow and shit keep droppin
    belive it or not im hot blazin and raw-guys
    and its a fact im bigger then anna nicole's brawsize

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    Relentless,chase

    you can be next !!




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    Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
    They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it

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    shouldnt have to up this... Reply
    Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
    They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it

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    Oh shit...about time some1 aint come wack

    good shit mr. Rich

    u started nice.....but then at the end
    u kinda forced alot of it....so i got bored
    therefor u get a ....
    a nice feedback from me....but work on it some more....remember theres always something WAY BETTER.....
    good shit
    keep it up

    Peace......
    1..............

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    MC Illest
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    WHOA!! RAW... actually gave some positive feedback. I might actually not hate on you now!!

    BUT WAIT, HOW LONG WILL IT LAST???

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    VI Souljah
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    man dat there wuz tight. but i felt u shoulda make it a lil longer. not many pieces have kept me interested to finish it but this wuz ill no doubt. keep yo thang homie. ONE

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    chemistry
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    the shit is real phat i like it it was hot keep them rollin in

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    Av1r3x
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    sup Rich,good to c u postin again.Dis piece wuz good,woulda flowed betta wit a few xtra words in sum of ya bars na'mean.But u had good vocab fo realz.Stay ^
    -Avi

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