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  1. #1
    endovidualmind
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    a quick key

    this is for the ones who love to hate
    its the bliss thats so tough to obtain
    unless you remain with abilities keen
    seeing the inner mainframes invisability
    still styles and skills be taken by frost
    tossed into a frozen tundra,heat's lost
    defeating the cause w/a stroke of genius
    society decieves but's hooked,& fiends us
    breaths golden dust down our throats
    surround the masses with uneasy souls
    breezes of fire keepin cold coals aflame
    not aspiring for fame,b/sights set in their aim
    reflecting blame upon myself through mirrors on the shelf
    better days my hands were once delt
    now oppurtunities stealthfully evade
    un-successful counter-attacks slayed
    an image portraid caves and cracks
    back to steps 1,2,and 3 still paying tabs
    layin slabs of concrete material
    my reign beseated underneath the imperial
    preying for a miracle but left without belief
    concieve my fate in a glass ball of schemes
    seen as a nusience but the streets are my home
    so leave this already broken leaf alone
    doing things on my own,mic in hand
    lifes only bland if you look at beuty and see plain land
    i scan my vision deeper and beyond
    a seeker of faith and love, making me strong



    i typed this really fast just seeing what came out, tell me what ya think

  2. #2
    endovidualmind
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    replies my people, replies!!

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    lol, ^^^ when I saw those replies it made me laugh b/c you said replies are welcome and stuff and it was like you thought "I know why they didn't reply, I didn't have links... Ha!, now reply bitches..." lmao, but anyway....

    Okay, this wasn't all that hot I have definately seen you come off better. This flow was choppy and after reading it for a while it starts sinking into a poetry type feel. The lyrics were decent but it carried a good message. This is definately not one of your best, keep droppin.

    pz
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    Damn Girl!

  5. #5
    endovidualmind
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    sucka^^

    lol j/p

    i wrote this in seriously like 5 min..

    so yea anyways

    my topical piece is doper than yours!

    HAHAHAHHA

  6. #6
    MSC
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    its aight

  7. #7
    endovidualmind
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    OMG that is the weakest reply ive ever seen!

    HERB!!!

  8. #8
    DeTox
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    i wannabe be a herb to

    this was nice LOL

    no im just playing it was nice but i seen you do better, but you cant be nice in every rhyme. the longer it was the more i lost intrest.

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