Holidae Wise Vs mc aines

[Holidae Wise]

10 lines, no d/r's, no crew votes, no biting or recycling etc. Check in and verse are due today when ever. If you drop in the next hour i'll drop right after you.
~1~

[Aines]

check.............................check........... ........check...................check............. ..check in..........................

[Holidae Wise]

[quote]
mc aines wrote on 01-11-04 11:45 AM:
by blind spit i mean no feedin off each others lines.......drop ya shit i wil drop after u.....i wi check in
[quote]


Didn't even relize that a blind spit and feedin lines are differant, who's the newb..
I could murder you with a candle stick in frontlines and you still wouldn't have a clue..
Shows how wack you truely are, wait a second, how many herbs are in ur crew so far..
XLG?? looks like you guys still think that being hard over the net is right, i can ko u with 1 bar..
No need for brains and wit cuz mc aines is next to retirement, u should all out quit..
Cuz i drain knowledge of your ounce of gift so count the amount of bars i spit..
Compared to my barz and flow ur startin to look unmodern enough to be tarzan yo..
& your lines are so wack you make a new definition for the meaning of deathrow..
I shouldn't have to use ten lines to rip through mc aines eyes he's that wack..
I'm runnin off with your spine you can say that it's mine, so yeah i got your back..

[Aines]

See I'm gone spit another verse and scrap what I wrote/
you said no dick riding but you keep some dick in ya throat/
Let me battle myself and I'll never stop flowing/
Put "Hol W" in a porn and he'll never stop blowing/
I wear this mic out like crips and bloods wearing khakis/
I drop bombs on my challengers like the U.S did Iraqis/
You aint reppin no crew,Cos your lyrics are old and played/
My Lyrics are ancient but still up in clubs always gettin sprayed/
You just aint got the right style, so most nigggas be passin off/
Keep ya jokes on the shelf kid, you just a laughing stock/

[Holidae Wise]

Uppin x1
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[Aines]

uppin number #1................................................ .................................................. ...............................

[Holidae Wise]

Uppin x2
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[.:FiorZ:.]

aight....this was a gd battle

holidae wise....i liked your opener and finisha but sum lines were jus fillers and your flow didn't work cos your lines were stretched....if you used multis then it would help your flow....t'was a gd verse tho

mc aines......opener was dope...best line in battle...i think u came with harder punches and finisha was gd.....flow was better and vocab was tight....da u.s line was nice

gd battle fellas but ma verdict is...

vote=mc aines

props to both

[Mimesis.]

holiday - good structure, good flow, vocab was a lil basic, to much forced wordplay, ok multis, some of the punches hit pretty hard, good personals

mc - ok structure, flow fell off a lil, vocab was basic, wordplay was ok, not to many multis, a few punches landed, ok personals

conclusion - holiday takes this in flow, punches, and personals, so he gets my vote

VOTE - HOLIDAE WISE

[Mimesis.]

yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u did two did the same

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105679

much appreciated........

[Holidae Wise]

And you call urself a vet, i had meta's and wordplay maybe you din't see em becuz my posts is below 10......next time take a closer look.
1ne

[.:FiorZ:.]

listen dik ed....dnt tink u can giv me shit.....yh u had metas but i neva sed metas......i sed more multis would've help'd ya flow..........u tried to use them but they didn't work.......if you'd have used them all the way through then it wudda flow'd betta........

so, u take a closer look and read wot i sed

[MD_killa]

Yep...

but hmm that was a pretty good battle... i was feelin both textcee's verse's...

HW- came hard son... makin a spot light for these cats on the site... yep son... you got pure talent... your not a newbie... MC Under Estimated you... like WHOA... but son... don't up the thread more then 5 times or u will be DQ'd... replaying to messages count ... hmmm.. but i think u already knew that... just helpoin out.. structure was a lil stretched, but everything was well played... good ish dunny

MC
See I'm gone spit another verse and scrap what I wrote/
you said no dick riding but you keep some dick in ya throat/
Son this really didn't make since.. terrible opener

but other then that ya verse was pretty coo..., it was on point in other spots... flow ... no real vocab... i think thats where it was decided during the Complexity of the battle son... up that

Vote- HW ... He was more Complex with his verse... so he gets the vote... good battle kids...

Caesar On3

[Under Dawg]

flow- mc aines
punchlines- mc aines
multies- mc aines
impact of disses- mc aines
wordplay- mc aines

what can i say this battle was pretty much one sided.. holidae wise you had some stretched ass lines that i aint like.. mc aines kept it short and sweet

ill poll vote in this battle.. once yall hit this battle up with a vote

heres the link

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105897

[Under Dawg]

.................................................. .................................................. ............................................ just poll voted