okay...30 max...blah blah and stuff...
due within this Monday or whateva...
Island
13th Disciple
okay...30 max...blah blah and stuff...
due within this Monday or whateva...
lmao... and I'm here...
The tie breaker people..! The fuckin tie breaker..!
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Legend: Merk Squad
moved to elevated as requested . @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@!
cshep79: i'll holla tomorrow...and beat that ass
Haven't I always told you... not to open ya mouth..?
and it begins...
I'm so sick, I'll sum up ya whole verse in 2 lines of effort,
You look like Ralph Tresvant n' well... my lines are better
you pissed off dunny cause I never wrote a letter to you,
and how you here? when Aisle 5 n' Carsonjet are both better than you...
ur text is wack as fuck, and in audio's ur quality just fuckin sucks
n id make u swallow ur words... but you'd just probably throw em' up
Cause you suck at battles n’ topicals, your just a rap poser
whoa, Win and backwards lines my write can I wack so your...
You just had a three way with guys & you fuckin loved it
Im so ahead of you, this line is setting up the punch above it
Land's patiently blazing, I can’t believe you said that you spit,
cause I’d beat you, your shadow, and any name you’re registered with...
sonnin' this dyke, who STAYS online, and to show his final scene
When his life flashed b4 his eyes all he saw was a sign in screen
when you think back on this battle n' how Island just came raw,
think of it as pool... I pulled out the stick and you 8 ball...
and the way Island is rhymin... you're better of to scream murder,
n' I'd rather you kill that beef... than raise ya kid on white castle burgers
Understand me? Your soft dog, But don't cry 'n shit see,
n' half ya verse`ll prolly be YOU usin other people... to diss ME...
Your clothes are faded n' old, going bald, plus your a bad writer
& you’re the only one on RB who’s house can catch a flat tire
n' in the last 10 I'll end this battle right where I started dumb ass,
dissin you... at the same position of skill... as fuckin begun as...
Ima use the next line to advertise, cuz everyone knows ya suck
All voters listen to Camarac's audio, I swear its dope as fuck
Anyways, Island you'd never win if RB didn’t have herbs as voters
^That’s me battling myself cause Coolie your not even worth the closer...
Now that's some ass kickin shit right yonder...
Tag'D
Legend: Merk Squad
*cough*...
okay...lets go..
Avalon...Island...Mr.E....and others...all these aliases...damn...
...fucka Mtv when in RB...didn't u already make the banned?
man...in all of ur battles..u get Rock'd more than the Scorpion King
...think ur punches is felt?..shit..u even got weak mood swings
heres the thing...ur not a threat..hell...this isn't even a fight...
...u was once hard like vodka...now...ur equal to Odoul's light!
u all hype.....but i know ur type another kid who wants 2 be me...
...shit...after i cybered wit Yana...u then ghosted for Lady Divinity!
seriously...i'll give u some props tho'...then proceed wit the act...
...cuz u do a hell of a job...of trying to convince me that ur black
herez the facts...its time for u to eat what i'm beginning to dish..
...i seen ur pic & u look like the ex member of Hootie & da Blowfish
dare i talk shit?...da fuck u think i'm talkin everytime i say ur name
...i tried to picture u a challenge..but u just ain't fittin that frame
me & u ain't one in the same...BUT...can't say that about ur lines..
...when its proven...u bit from Camarac, Evolve, Chrit, & even mine
this is the last time...i'm spankin u cuz its 2 easy 2 do it again...
...ur weak...i mean in order to get ur handle...u had to jack Gilligan
really man...ur pathetic and stop beggin for me to be ur mentor...
..cuz u will neva have a dope rating even at a rehabilitation center
send this to ur printer...and remember how i'm leavin u dicked...
...cuz u winnin wud be outta the blue...like murdered ex crips
bitch..i'ma send this to Cprogress..1st to show how i left u son'd..
...then for him to give ur wins...to the cats u stole ur verses from..
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blah...key'd...don't know if i matched...i'll read urs now...good luck
LMFAO.....
Avalon aka Isnland
Dope verse...
Good punches
Wordplay was aight
Overall........15/20
13th
Dope verse also
Dope punches
good personals
Structure was good
Overall.....17/20
Dope battle
But 13th edged this one...
His personals were a lil dope..
Props to both tho...
Welcome back Av...
Vote-13th..
*13th*
When are you gonna battle me?
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Damn.....Good Battle...Props To Both....
Both Had Good Structure... 13th a lil Better
Both Flow'd About Tha Same
Wordplay Was Good On Both Sides...Av..I Liked Tha Backwords Line.....But 13th Came Just As Strong...
Punches...13th I Think Got This...Cuz Of Personals......
Hell Of A Battle....But
Vote- 13th
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13th killed it my eyes...av/island had a nice verse to solid punches n such but i think 13th got it.....nice punches n metas...good battle
fav line- man...in all of ur battles..u get Rock'd more than the Scorpion King
...think ur punches is felt?..shit..u even got weak mood swings
I aint mad at all i am jus bothered
I'll get honest for real, i aint been the best father
Like...Toys R Us, Chuckie Cheese...
You know a lil boy grow up wit these needs
New Years and Christmas, even the birthday
At least bring the nigga to his school on his first day
I cant believe it, this is the same way i was treated
So maybe its history repeated
-Joe Budden
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in other words my vote goes to 13th...................
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(peep battle with high class please)
I aint mad at all i am jus bothered
I'll get honest for real, i aint been the best father
Like...Toys R Us, Chuckie Cheese...
You know a lil boy grow up wit these needs
New Years and Christmas, even the birthday
At least bring the nigga to his school on his first day
I cant believe it, this is the same way i was treated
So maybe its history repeated
-Joe Budden
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the fuck r u 2 doin battlin in elevated and
not elite? vote - 13th
13th had straight personals/wordplay
where as Av threw in a couple forced
generic lines.
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Originally posted by 13th Disciple
*cough*...
okay...lets go..
Avalon...Island...Mr.E....and others...all these aliases...damn...
...fucka Mtv when in RB...didn't u already make the banned?
man...in all of ur battles..u get Rock'd more than the Scorpion King
...think ur punches is felt?..shit..u even got weak mood swings
heres the thing...ur not a threat..hell...this isn't even a fight...
...u was once hard like vodka...now...ur equal to Odoul's light!
u all hype.....but i know ur type another kid who wants 2 be me...
...shit...after i cybered wit Yana...u then ghosted for Lady Divinity!
seriously...i'll give u some props tho'...then proceed wit the act...
...cuz u do a hell of a job...of trying to convince me that ur black
herez the facts...its time for u to eat what i'm beginning to dish..
...i seen ur pic & u look like the ex member of Hootie & da Blowfish
dare i talk shit?...da fuck u think i'm talkin everytime i say ur name
...i tried to picture u a challenge..but u just ain't fittin that frame
me & u ain't one in the same...BUT...can't say that about ur lines..
...when its proven...u bit from Camarac, Evolve, Chrit, & even mine
this is the last time...i'm spankin u cuz its 2 easy 2 do it again...
...ur weak...i mean in order to get ur handle...u had to jack Gilligan
really man...ur pathetic and stop beggin for me to be ur mentor...
..cuz u will neva have a dope rating even at a rehabilitation center
send this to ur printer...and remember how i'm leavin u dicked...
...cuz u winnin wud be outta the blue...like murdered ex crips
bitch..i'ma send this to Cprogress..1st to show how i left u son'd..
...then for him to give ur wins...to the cats u stole ur verses from..
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blah...key'd...don't know if i matched...i'll read urs now...good luck
still usin me in battles huh.....
p.s I do not cyber just for ur info![]()
good battle though...
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Island=His Shit Waas Aite Nice Setup Liked The Punches Was Interested Like THe Flow But Hmmm..... Really Wasnt That Creative
13=His Shit Was Funnier And I Liked It Cause It Was Better Wit Punches And Shit I Liked His Personals He Said Lmao I Like The Make The Banned Line Shit Was Nice.....U Was Way More Consistent And More Creative
Vote=13th
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