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Good Luck!
PaYce
Verstyle
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*All Rules Apply
*You Drop 1st
*All Votes must be explained(New Way)
*No 1 line votes
Good Luck!
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Good luck PAYCE DO YOUR DAMN THING don't let this one legged creep out run you in rappin.................and ver you had d-riders so don't give me that defeat bullshit your whole verse was about someone other than me, but it's o.k. cause I'm going to make sure your record gets stained you furball
ANd I'm a 100% WOMAN stupid ass
u wish u could have what I have...
priceless pussy and talent
Just for the record oCANti is not allowed to vote on this battle...
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Peace
shit talker, ur mouth and ur ass act like they an alliance
so imma plug both sockets like they an electrical appliance
The defiance of ur rhymes is "not worth reading"
But im like Tonya Montana...looks can always be deceiving
sure my record aint appealin, but does that really matter
When I predicted W in my direction like a Weather forecaster
Yea sure below my name, I have no atavar selected
but that's not nearly as bad as u...vertices lackin edges
just like trimmin a hedge, im clippin ur rhymes
Soarin over ya lines more than Q's balls in Colorado skies!
I saw ya after a post, droppin the line "Peace"
but ur an assasin...how do u leave people R-I-P?
I thought they were cheats, killed folks wit suprise attacks
Ur just like talkin mimes...exposin ur fake acts!
addin facts to the files, allow me to charge ya guilty on trial
just like Mugsy Bogues...small is ya games vertical-style!
I've gone miles, while ya styll think u found a Cancerous cure
Even tho ur DR's are hurr...
My PaYce too fast for ya......
..........so victory is one thing I will endure!
Ima vote on this when its done meanwhile payce vote on this shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103093
u droppin that verse anytyme soon...it's been like an hour after I dropped mine and styll waitin for ur comeback...like u said "I drop first" but i thought u'd reply in a reasonable amount of tyme.
Ha! sorry... i went to the store anyways...heres a quike 10min
Enjoy
Attained chronological knowledge, I've learned all that time teaches
forming the pieces, cause me to force feed you my Thesis
echo's of potent words immersed in my verbs, Lone Soldier provokin herds
seperate your mind, body and soul...your Whole is broken to Thirds
assertin' words cause retracting claps, noise relapse's back to silence
because I harm with no purpose like random acts of violence
recently, it seems to be, a Society comprised of Clones of Wack
the bone less backed cant stand to mine and escape with hope intact
no joke thats fact, bound to leave this battle thread choked or slapped
you compared to Me is incomprehensible like the Pope on crack
My brain's the source of creativity, you could say I spawned your taste
various claims but mostly distorted, the True have been misplaced
your a Rook like Chess, I've yet to be impressed and I'm still waiting
it's like attending a School full of Idiots the way this kid is D Grading
The best can't test my vocab, you lack the Test within your gonads
I bet I couldn't feel your rhymes if you smacked me with your notepads
you're just the frontin type, who'll get beat down for the hell of it
the type that's like, "i don't do coke, i only like the smell of it
dwell on it...your a wannabe that pump lead with mechanical pencils
the closest you'll get to outlining beef is with fucking animal stencils
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102857
Il hit this battle up when verstyle drops
good shit .payce..but verse is good
hit the link up honestly
pc ill be back
official breakdown...
openerayce
closer:verstyle
punches:tie
personals
multis:verstyle
complexity:Verstyle
overall:verstyle
both verses were good but verstyle's overall flow was better and easier to read...payce you had good punches and personals, keep that shit up but your structure's a little off man.....no hate though.....nice battle, props to both
1 vote and over 60 views... common ya'll... please dont sleep on this battle.
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Peace
this battle was ok not bad not herbish
i sense you guys think about flow too much
both need work in punches...payce i sensed you
trying to have nice flow and then good punches
but that isnt the case
i thought verstyle had better punches and Payce
had better personals...both structures need work
Versytles punches were slightly better though
so he wins..
both need work on punches thought try to make them
witty
peace
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haha, oops i made it make the smiley faces but ya'll know what i meant..............my bad, sorry for the freepost
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