*10min 20max lines
*all rules apply
*you drop 1st
verse due 40min after check in
*i will drop shortly after you
*Good Luck!!
LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1
Verstyle
*10min 20max lines
*all rules apply
*you drop 1st
verse due 40min after check in
*i will drop shortly after you
*Good Luck!!
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ChEcKiN In.....................................100 CHARACTERS MY ASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
check it..............
ThA way i school cats is a thing u cant comprehend wit...
Ur like a student driver only on his permit...
Ull be lucky if u can score a punch against me...
Cuz i dodge em and dish em like muhammad ali...
This bitch is one of them fags who will pull a no show...
Due 40 mins afta check in and its 2 hours late...hello?!?!....
So ima drop and give him sum time to key his shit down...
And if he dont show up its Dq'ed and i get the winning crown...
But i came weak so far so its time to kick it up so i demolish this sorry excuse....
Cuz these punches hittin so hard he came right out of his shoes....
Shoulda never battled me cuz i jus ruined your record...
But u got KO'ed and itll be a while till u no wut occured
Ohh sorry man.. trying to get some shit settled with my other battle. anyways... i will drop soon. nice verse
peace
ehhh quike 5min verse,good luck, let the voting begin
Verse'll leave ya eyes crushed like Stevie Wonder at fight club
look at this i got CUM ARTIST trying to bite nuts
fuck it i fight sluts and smite scrubs watch him run like roaches light touch
bitch you aint tight cuz you aint hard like when dykes fuck
this battle is over and my verse just barely started
talk all the trash you want muthafucka you still garbage
i'll leave you heartless with ya wig parted with skinned cartilage
blast cartridges at your family until ya kins departed
Lyrical..the fuckin lamb of a maytr to be slaughtered
spam scarred KID think he run shit? you will get punished
whind up and have ya lung pinched when that gun hits
have you talkin in Hebrew like you and Jesus' tongues switched
im making this bum flinch like hung kids with they guts split
hit this bitch so hard that his future sons flinch
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Opener:verstyle..was just a little better..
Multies:verstyle..he knew how to use em..
Punches:verstyle..You can clearly see...
Wordplay:insane..Just abit better, but ver did this quick..
Vocabulary:verstyle..Ver is a little more experianced and it shows..
Finisher:insane..insane got finisher cause your last bar verstyle is played..
Overall Vote:verstyle
Just hit alot harder with his vote...
Vote on this battle please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102544
Why dont it let you edit?...Verstyle hit alot harder with punches and multies as hes is more experianced, thats why he got the vote
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Verstyle won this, easily .. oh and hey, are you from albuquerque verse?
he killed it with the multi's .. his was actually a decent verse .. which is kinda surprising .. let me know verse ..
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Sand yes i was born in albuquerque, why? ohh and i think that you might of forgotten to poll your vote you go back and do so..
Thank You
Peace
Opener:verstyle
Multies:verstyle
Punches:verstyle
Wordplay:in
Vocabulary:verstyle
Finisher: in
Overall Vote:verstyle
Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress
yes....verstyle pretty much destroyed lyricallyinsane in every category....lol....he beat him in punches, vocab, flow, and multis....no need for a breakdown at all....verstyle wins this by a landslide in my opinion....good read from u both though...no hate...just a vote..
peace
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Verstyle easily wins with a barrage of multi's, superior flow, better wordplay, and harder punches.
The "Stevie Wonder/Fight Club" opener was hilarious.
Insane was ok, very basic metas, very basic vocab.
Little to no wordplay, very weak punches if any at all.
Get aggressive, Insane!
Vers for tha win.
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