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Thread: 'cut Short'

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    BEST topical writer... Endeva.'s Avatar
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    'cut Short'

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...67#post1031267
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...77#post1031277
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    Nuthin is ever certain, random is the iron curtain
    That takes souls, when the best is yet to serve them
    It don’t deserve them, I mean why does it happen to the best will’d
    Like a bit, drilled,, through the core of the feeling
    Im still breathing, but its got me stunned and left wheezing
    I mean whoever! I got their feeling, its reality
    And in some circumstances its defin-at-ely, gonna reap
    The eternal sleep, it hits deep, an emotion a heavy notion
    The heart beat slowens, tick, tick until it flat line zones
    But ya gotta be prepared not scared, or your thraot’ll be snared
    Filled up, with the eyes, and that’ll get them nowhere
    Or you!,, hands like alcoholics shaking in despair
    Gotta care, stay strong, it happens to 1 in 3, aint you!.. Lucky!
    Don’t want it to be! Live ya life free, a day at a time
    Until it declines or gets redefined as some thing following a different line
    That cant be adjusted, straight ahead until it’s erupted
    Don’t be presumptuous cos it jus hits like a car doing a 100!!……
    …….pZ
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    come on ppl...jus a quick sumthin i threw up... with meaning!...so.....pZ
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    "The heart beat slowens, tick, tick until it flat line zones
    But ya gotta be prepared not scared, or your thraot’ll be snared"

    Was feeling that line more then any other...

    For a " Quick something" you put toghter...it was pretty good...
    thoughts thrown onto paper or type up and an instant as your mind think of it..is the best way to do it....Nice piece...
    oh yes your vocan is pretty much always on point..from what I have read from you so far...

    Keep it up...

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    Ya I was feelin it pretty good, it was tight and some of the lines really stood out for me.......keep the shit up,

    and plz vote on this shit i jus need 2 more votes

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101455

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    thnx ppl....any more...pZ
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    yeah..i liked it..flow was aiight and vocab was good too.....for something quick you really threw it together....
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