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good luck
Criticize22
Yu Bin SunD
10 line max
u know rules
u drop first
good luck
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coo foo
Yo Yo Yo Yo
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The Only Thing i regret is that i have only but one life to lose for my country!!!
Those that cannot except other races must die!
Im quick to kill find a place and bury men/
Thats why this dude dont want beef like a fucking vegetarian//
After this battle when i win dont be talking shit/
Goahead Claim you hard i already know you softer than pamela lee's tits//
You know im tay and like god i hold the power/
The only bars you drop is in the jail shower//
While you riding huv caps im ridin on "22" like im emmit/
ill beat the shit out of u only take me 5 miniutes//
Yo Yo Yo Yo
Quotes:
The Only Thing i regret is that i have only but one life to lose for my country!!!
Those that cannot except other races must die!
that wuz iight i guess
Yo Yo Yo Yo
Quotes:
The Only Thing i regret is that i have only but one life to lose for my country!!!
Those that cannot except other races must die!
A Quick K.O
Why Did U Even Shoot At This Vet..
Ur 13 Can't Rap And If You Lookin For GirlS Here Sorry U Ain't Hit Puberty Yet..
Ya Punches Are Like Elton John's Fights...They Never Land Straight..
This Kid Is A LightWeight......Who Knows Wat This Man Ate..
Like Gays In Car Accidents......Ima Wreck This Fag...
Doggie If You Think Your A Lone Star Your Mistaken.....Cause Its Only Ya Texas Flag..
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im sorry but i couldnt tell if some of that stuff rhymed or not
Yo Yo Yo Yo
Quotes:
The Only Thing i regret is that i have only but one life to lose for my country!!!
Those that cannot except other races must die!
oo now i catch the concept of it juts a weird setup to me sorry !
Yo Yo Yo Yo
Quotes:
The Only Thing i regret is that i have only but one life to lose for my country!!!
Those that cannot except other races must die!
hey i give the win to pooch....she ate you critsize...
punches=pooch
metaphors=none
structure=none
originality=pooch
flow=critsize
vote=pooch
I know your vote didn't count because you can't poll yet, but if you did vote, it would have been disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-strobe
good thing u cant vote !
Yo Yo Yo Yo
Quotes:
The Only Thing i regret is that i have only but one life to lose for my country!!!
Those that cannot except other races must die!
lol jk ya i think his was more original than mine but its all good !
Yo Yo Yo Yo
Quotes:
The Only Thing i regret is that i have only but one life to lose for my country!!!
Those that cannot except other races must die!
uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......numero 1
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this was a good battle. i guess you have improved your skills crit. but if my vote would count it be for critisize, but only cause his stuff was original. but dont worry. you'll elevate soon enough
thanks phresh
Yo Yo Yo Yo
Quotes:
The Only Thing i regret is that i have only but one life to lose for my country!!!
Those that cannot except other races must die!
oops. i didnt mean to say critisize in my paragraph for my vote, i mean yu bin sund. sorry for the inconvienance and expecially critisize. my bad. lol
phresh when u get 100 come back and vote 4 me if ya will thanks homie !
Yo Yo Yo Yo
Quotes:
The Only Thing i regret is that i have only but one life to lose for my country!!!
Those that cannot except other races must die!
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