Mr W.rite vs. FreeYayo

[Mr W.Rite]

the rules have been set...
10-12 max lines...
u drop first...
i will drop later on
real votes please.
no d/r &
no hate votes


good luck...

[-Jacka-]

yayo have fun getting shitted on.

lolol

damn dawg i had that same idea ..for that alter ego shit..

reminds me of a jordan commercail

[FreeYayo]

aight... yo...

why should I call u mr. when u don't even spit tight
u probably never wrote shit in ya whole life/
like pizza in a burger king kid u in the wrong place
go get da copz cuz u'll vanish without a trace/
like a blood stain bein washed away u will fade
came up like u hard but walk in shame cuz u'll fail/
like a fuckin ant 'mr' will get trampled
u won't even know what actually really happened/
cuz u only in this game for the show u know
pluz ya walk talk and clothez it iz all for show/
u can't do it even though it was shown
cuz ya shit iz still wack and mine iz like 'whoa'/

pz.

[FreeYayo]

aight that kid can't vote, what the fuckz your problem ?................................................. .................................................. ..................

[-Jacka-]

nuthin u jsut luv the dik u wanna battle me next..
an i just no where mr rite came from...

so yayo u wanna battle me

[Mr W.Rite]

checkin in
droppin soon as i can...
100 characters........................................ .................................................. .................................................. ....................

[Mr W.Rite]

aight...

why'd i agree to this shit....aint got time for the winless geek...
it wont start here..
meaning ya rap career...bright future..or ya winnin streak...
he's getting weak...i should feel bad for even dissin this hoe...
and we'll see how hard he is
.............................standin next to me under the mistle toe...
somethings missin bro..oh yea personals..for him its hopeless...
did him a favor...........battlin me maybe he'll finally get noticed...
wackness must be taught... i give props to those that teach ya..
go back to school kid..............cuz u aint doing shit here either....


check his occupation in his profile to get that last line


decided to go eight instead..that should be enough..
keyed it up before i went to lunch so..
let the voting begin...

[FreeYayo]

uppin 4 honest votes............................................. .................................................. ................

[Mr W.Rite]

first up come on folks...
we need votes.......................^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^

[*Blac Haze*]

mr w.rite took this by skill, you had better punches, structure multies and everything.. you just served this kid.. but yayo your verse was alright.. keep spitting

vote = mr w.rite..

hit dis up...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101949
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102049

[Provoke]

FreeYayo
Your structure was basic..good.
But content wise you just lacked..
The witty,funny or personal punches,
Did not occur in your verse..
Basically quite weak to be honest..
I mean your not that bad.. just work on,
Punches & that witty wordplay which are,
Essential in battles.
Overall Below average..

Mr W.Rite
Pretty basic..try not to fill space up with the..
Dots so much though..
You had some nice lines..good personals..
& sum funny, witty lines that summat where..
Quite enjoyable to read, a rare thing in FL.
The mistletoe line made me laugh a little.
This is a battle, punches are what count most..
You had way better punches & personals..
So..do the math.
Overall Ok-Good.

vote Mr W.Rite

[~CeRtiFieD~]

aight hot battle, the punches an wordplay won this battle fo him.
MR W.Rite, u got sum good skill dawg. In fact id say rite got most of the vote points.

so overall*rite.....im poll vote l8r on, when i got 100 posts aight...

[CarsonJetX2]

ok this wasnt even enjoyable.....

it was like watch a bear eat a squirrel.....
m killed yayo in every way.....personals'punches'flo.......meti's multi's....even tho the dot deal was dumb....

yayo elevate

vote MR

[Taktik]

V/ mwr

nice verse...your structure was vet style...nice job...good punches, couple nice personals

Yayo was basic...nothin to complex nor hard...it was ok...but not good nuff to beat Rite

[MyNd. FuLL]

my 2nd up.thanx for the votes i will hit up those battles later...^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^