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  1. December 27th, 2003, 08:59 PM #1
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    Alphabet Acrobatics

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...28#post1022328

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...41#post1022341

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...93#post1022393

    If you can download the instrumental to Blackalicious' 'Alphabet Aerobics', the lyrics fit in quite nicely...



    Alphabet Acrobatics


    assault all assuredly awesomely astounding
    abstract with attacks, always askin around and

    be the better buster batter been and break a bone
    blast your bowl and beat a bong bangin beats your own

    cussin crap and crammin cones chronic crawls along creatin
    collossul crimes crushin creeps callin for a cone

    days driving down done dope dealin dime
    dumb doin drugs do a demonstration

    erase each and every energetic enemy
    eternally extending ease externally the end of me

    find a fat feel, flow the funk freestyle
    finally face fools and fly your finest file

    grace gods ground got a good grip glorious
    get a great girl gotta grab i guess gorgeous

    have a hot home here is how its honed to hear like a
    hound at heel humble hurry heavily hes here

    image i intrigue insert idioms intensly
    illest whem i'm irate indecisive and immensely

    jacked from the joint jammed dribblin with juices
    jumped up and joyful at the drugs we judge for uses

    king kong cant come close to catchin this kid
    crafty with class killin closely with a clue kit

    laughing at a loser lovin life longer
    lotta lost leaders like lunar landers

    mike in my mouth movin mimes mechanically
    meanly memorise it in my mind mentally

    never knew none now i'm not a number
    need a new name now a newer nigga

    orally i omit only off bits outlaw
    opening often orate only on hits

    pleasure pushing pens packing props playfully
    pressin for a part pullin pounds payin fully

    quickly on the quest carrying my quick styles
    quittin on questions quicker than a cluey child

    rippin real rhymes wreakin rude and unruly
    writing reasons to replace your rank truly

    spittin shit slippin slick slidin like its slippery
    sorta show sticks so i spit shit sickly

    too tough timin tricky trips tickin time
    test teams try to take it topside im tryin

    universal, uniquely untouched
    using youse and upturn views i'm upfront

    volley out verbs vainly versin every vowel
    viewing viciously and i'm very, very virile

    watchin well i'm waitin which way it wanna weigh
    where i went wishin when we wanna walk away

    exercise extremely accept whats expected
    xrated excuses, existence extended

    young youths yellin at you yearnin for a use
    uniforms used yearly in your universe

    zimmin on a zephyr zippin through the magazine
    stimulatin music like a zanzibar disease, itz eezy!!




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  2. December 27th, 2003, 09:31 PM #2
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    your wordplay is fucken phenominol and so is the play off words sadly some bars hed little to no meaning but a feel good vibe you can catch an ol school beat to this easily and feazebly.....you got skill but you need to focus just a lil harder and direct to one goal and target then exploit it.
    never the less this is real good just needs minor work
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  3. December 27th, 2003, 10:42 PM #3
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    Yeah this was alright i thought....structure could use some work though i think, but you can work on that...you had some good workplay...you took a good approach on this concept i thought, its been done before but you did good on it i think....keep at it.
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  4. December 27th, 2003, 10:45 PM #4
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    Wow. This was really good, but after reading all the letters it got kinda boring. There is definatly talent though. You should do this in all of your pieces. Good job.
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  5. December 27th, 2003, 11:49 PM #5
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    seen alot of this before from other cats, Id admit yours is one of the better of all of the ones i've seen... Like Word Play said though alot of the lines really held no meaning beyond the words. I fealt you did a niice job at creating meaning in the lines that did make sence though. I think I would focus on building this off one general topic next time though. I was feeling the vocab and the attempt. I will check out some of your other work when I get a chance to see what else you got...
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  6. December 28th, 2003, 12:11 AM #6
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    the flow was tight and the structure wasnt to bad even tho it could use some work. however i found it kinda hard to follow in some places becuase its hard to make complete sentances using the same letter. personally i couldnt have done it lol.
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  7. December 28th, 2003, 12:23 AM #7
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    thanks for all the feed back so far. i would appreciate more peeps peepin this. maybe some mods when they get time. i will fully work on my shit. keep your eyes pinned for more spits by my lips. shibby as. i am truly elevatin. more encouragement, and gettin better on my part, will hopefully get me there...
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  8. December 28th, 2003, 02:22 AM #8
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    THis was a hard piece it looked like, i have respect for the thought it took to do this drop, work on the meanings of lines and it will be straight
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  9. December 28th, 2003, 02:36 AM #9
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    i liked it.......i liked the creativity...........great vocabulary....prally took sum time........structure was so so........
    metas ehh....
    wordplay great....
    meaning.....so so....
    good piece....
    deserves......V
    8/10
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  10. December 28th, 2003, 04:00 AM #10
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    wanting more input from you guys, please gimme some feedback

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  11. December 28th, 2003, 08:02 AM #11
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    this was sum funny shit. half the stuff u said didn't mean shit though but i liked it alot.keep at it
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  12. December 28th, 2003, 06:35 PM #12
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    most of it actually does make sense, you just need to look a little deeper. anyways, uppin for more comments...
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  13. December 28th, 2003, 07:14 PM #13
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    Played concept, well executed.
    Strong wordplay..everything made sense..
    As for as i can see..lack of vocabulairy,
    Which is perfectly understandable in this case.
    A more even lined structure would've helped..
    & seperatin' each bar?..unnessacerry.
    Still, enjoyable.. ok read.


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  14. December 29th, 2003, 07:24 PM #14
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  15. December 30th, 2003, 12:30 AM #15
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    Good concept, but I suggest you work more with the theme.
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