MC Nookie vs madman-doubless

[madman-doubleSS]

Aight here's the rules:

10 lines
No crew or hate votes. (Fair Fight)
No dickrydin.( Sorry homos.)

[madman-doubleSS]

Check it:

I'm gonna put a clip in this kids brain, leave him scarred for life/
Put an end to his living, then I'll move onto his wife/
MC Nookie, ya fuckin' rookie, why is ya record 2-10/
Oh yeah ya lost ten battles, and then won to be pretend/
Bitch this isn't pony land go back to ya Barbie's Nookie/
Or go back to Sesame Street, to hang with ya pal Cookie/
You can't take my punches so just play defence/
I give new meaning to the word "hurtful" ya ryhmes are a pretense/
I got a Licencse to Kill, while ya killin' hasn't even begun/
The only thing you know how to tote is a Red Ryder BB gun /

[MC Nookie]

madman-doubleSS needs a head lesson
in respectin what i got in me
thinks he's fuzzily chested
get this brain damaged baby a lobotomy

lil bitch with no crew, he's only fourteen too,
wouldnt know what to do, when he's confronted with smoo

no sex practice,
thats a major thing he lackin
jackin off to my rappin
and placin his nut in a napkin

this rap told a story, fuckin netcee,
so obviously, you aint yet ready for 'Nookie'...

haha

sorry bout 12 lines, had to put in the closer...

[MC Nookie]

was a pretty weak ass battle, not my best fo sho...
but lets get the votes a' pollin............................................ .................................................. .......................

[MC Nookie]

uppin this shit for closure........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .....................................

[spokenoh]

Ok, Nookie,what is "smoo"?
That was wack but o well, no hate

Punches-Madman
Personals-Madman
Multies-Nookie
Metaphors-neither
Structure-both were wack
Vocab-neither
Enjoyment-neither

Final Vote-Madman

[spokenoh]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101532

Could one of you hit up my battle please?Needs votes.

[MC Nookie]

uppin fo' votes, cmon peeps close this shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...............

[MC Nookie]

i'm uppin this.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......

[MC Nookie]

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[PaDDyMaN]

Madman took that one sorry dude, he just had better shit, I do like your format with the whole story thing but just not as many punches as him. He had more punches and a good ending, though WoodJohn already used "pretense and Defense" in a rhyme just recently, im not saying u copied but others might think so -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

[MC Nookie]

cant vote anyways, so dont waste our time...
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[PaDDyMaN]

LOL look at this kid hatin jus cuz I didnt think his shit won, nigga just cause I cant vote dont mean im wastin time, i suggest you take in all my insight nigga u gonna need it.

[MC Nookie]

diss needing votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...............................

[madman-doubleSS]

Yo Nookie, calm down. Paddyman, ya input really means a lot even though ya can't vote. I gotta apoligize about the ryhme that WoodJohn already spit, I didn't know. Aight, I'm winnin by one vote.